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aik mamooli koshish kar rahi hoon is se pehlay bhi maan ko bator hamdard aik nazam bhaiji thi magar ab mil nahi rahi hay

janay woh konsa musam tha
karb ki konsi manzil thi
umeed door bohut door
janay kahan kho gai thi
tera aana
jaisay taza hawa ka jhonka
jaisay khisan main bahar
ay hamdam meray
kia haqeeqat hay ya sapna
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aik mamooli koshish kar rahi hoon is se pehlay bhi maan ko bator hamdard aik nazam bhaiji thi magar ab mil nahi rahi hay

janay woh konsa musam tha
karb ki konsi manzil thi
umeed door bohut door
janay kahan kho gai thi
tera aana
jaisay taza hawa ka jhonka
jaisay khisan main bahar
ay hamdam meray
kia haqeeqat hay ya sapna
Aap ki ye mamooli koshish bohat umda hey, aor muggey umeed hey k baqi qareyein ko bhe pasand aaye gi.

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aur hum bhi dekhtay hain k humaray sathi kiya likhtay hain


/suno sathiyon main aap bhi shamil hain :-p

Jee inam jee acha topic hai .......... lets see kiya likha jaey ga agar likha gaya to ............

Khush rahain @};-
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hhmmm Ji ji bilkul, Main bhi shaamil hoon,InshaAllah koshish karoonga kuch,per contest k lye nahi,

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hope u'll people doing fine ...umm acha topic hai ...kuch likhnay ki koshish kari hai ....so haqeer si koshish hazir-e-kidhmat hai.....umied per dunia kam hai so umied hai k pasand aay gi...
keep smiling n take care
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Mera Koi Hamdard Nahi....

sisakti hui zindagi,jalta hua manzar
ay khuda kia teray baad,mera koi hamdard nahi

shikast-e-ziest hai,lahasil tamanaien
jo kahtay thay apna khud ko,wo hamdard bhi nahi

faraib-e-dunia buhat kahya,dhaikay aasman buhat say
har moor per jab bhi dhaika,mera koi hamdard nahi

sila kia paya mohabbat ka,naam-e-wafa badnaam hua
thokrien di sab nay mil k,mera koi hamdard nahi

wadoon pay apnay ghar ki,taqderien buhat banai thi
masiwaay sholoon k,mera koi hamdard nahi

kagaz ki kishtian,low-e-aag per banai
ab aag k siwa,mera koi hamdard nahi

moot mangi buhat hum nay,zindagi mil gai
ab intezar k siwa,mera koi hamdard nahi

tanhai ka aazab,has k sahoon kitna
ab waqt k siwa,mera koi hamdard nahi

pholoon say dil ko,kantoon say masal dia
ab taqdeer k siwa,mera koi hamdard nahi

maroonga nahi main,tumhari yaad main jana
thokro ne samjhadia,mera koi hamdard nahi

baikaar si baat q,hamesha kartay ho tum ZAIN
is dunia main tumhara,koi bhi hamdard nahi
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aa han aacha lafz tajweez kya hay dekhain koun koun aata hay maidan main aur akhir ko maidan marta koun hay
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hai zindagi sey nibah mumkin!!!!
Main zindagi sey nibha rahi hoon

Hai us nay pocha udaas ho tum!
main tunziya muskura rahi hoon

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hope u'll people doing fine ...umm acha topic hai ...kuch likhnay ki koshish kari hai ....so haqeer si koshish hazir-e-kidhmat hai.....umied per dunia kam hai so umied hai k pasand aay gi...
keep smiling n take care
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Mera Koi Hamdard Nahi....

sisakti hui zindagi,jalta hua manzar
ay khuda kia teray baad,mera koi hamdard nahi

shikast-e-ziest hai,lahasil tamanaien
jo kahtay thay apna khud ko,wo hamdard bhi nahi

faraib-e-dunia buhat kahya,dhaikay aasman buhat say
har moor per jab bhi dhaika,mera koi hamdard nahi

sila kia paya mohabbat ka,naam-e-wafa badnaam hua
thokrien di sab nay mil k,mera koi hamdard nahi

wadoon pay apnay ghar ki,taqderien buhat banai thi
masiwaay sholoon k,mera koi hamdard nahi

kagaz ki kishtian,low-e-aag per banai
ab aag k siwa,mera koi hamdard nahi

moot mangi buhat hum nay,zindagi mil gai
ab intezar k siwa,mera koi hamdard nahi

tanhai ka aazab,has k sahoon kitna
ab waqt k siwa,mera koi hamdard nahi

pholoon say dil ko,kantoon say masal dia
ab taqdeer k siwa,mera koi hamdard nahi

maroonga nahi main,tumhari yaad main jana
thokro ne samjhadia,mera koi hamdard nahi

baikaar si baat q,hamesha kartay ho tum ZAIN
is dunia main tumhara,koi bhi hamdard nahi


Bohat khoob Kasak jee @};-
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aik mamooli koshish kar rahi hoon is se pehlay bhi maan ko bator hamdard aik nazam bhaiji thi magar ab mil nahi rahi hay

janay woh konsa musam tha
karb ki konsi manzil thi
umeed door bohut door
janay kahan kho gai thi
tera aana
jaisay taza hawa ka jhonka
jaisay khisan main bahar
ay hamdam meray
kia haqeeqat hay ya sapna
bohat achay Asmaaerum jee zabardast! , Z@};-
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aik ghazal kay kuch ashaar paish e khidmat hain

Humdam, Hamdard doost aur saathi, hein behlaway saray
Koyee kissi kaa gham kaya bantay, sab ko apnay payaray

mitwa nahi hai meet nahi hai, adhooray ghum humaray..
kis kay daman mein dalain hain jo ma'an mein taray

jab dard tu ho dildar nahi, phir dard e dil sunayain kaya
mat kuraidoo, rehnay do, behtay zakham sath humaray

kurhna choroon kuch tu boloon, kab tuk guzray gi aisay
mil jaye ga yaheen kaheen, jo man ke leek sanwaray

kis soch mein gum baitha hai, janay wala kab aya hai
koi aisa jaam pilla saqi phir yaad na uski humain pukaray
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aik ghazal kay kuch ashaar paish e khidmat hain

Humdam, Hamdard doost aur saathi, hein behlaway saray
Koyee kissi kaa gham kaya bantay, sab ko apnay payaray

mitwa nahi hai meet nahi hai, adhooray ghum humaray..
kis ka