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This is a discussion on Muqaabala-e-nazam goyi baraaye SEPTEMBER 2006 within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by pessimist waqi bohat khoob likha hai aaap nain khaiyal THANKS DEAR MAGAR JUB JUDGE CHECK KARAIN GAI ...
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| THANKS DEAR MAGAR JUB JUDGE CHECK KARAIN GAI PHIR PATA CHALE GA |
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#12
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OOR UB APNI BHI NAZM SND KARO I M WAITNG JEET TOO AAP JAO GI BST F LUCK DEAR |
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| Asslamo alikum khayal bohut umdah khayal k sath aap aein aur chaa gain aghaz main hi itni achhi nazam parhne ko mil gai hope k agay aur log bhi apni apni patari se kiya kuch baramad karne walay hon gay ![]()
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#14
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| hi asslamualikum bhai sub say pehlay to apa itni achi kawish likhnay per meri terf say bohat bohat ziada mobarak baad qabool kerin lakin kuch cheezain batata chaloo ager app samjhin to ap ki poem kay under grift mid kay under ja ker loss ho gai thi or doosri baat kay aap koshish kerin kay apni poem ko (special poem ko compose ker kay submit kerwaya kerin kion kay is say pernay walay per bohat acha effect perta hai umeedd hai kay in ko note kerin gi or adopt kernay ki koshish kerin gi aik baar phir bohat bohat ziada daad qabool kijiye bohat bohat ziada doaaon kay sath jahan rahain bohat ziada khush rahin imran
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#15
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| hi asslamualikum how are you bohat bohat ziada mobarak baad wasool kijiye kay ap nay bohat achi kawich likhi hai lakin kuch batian hain jo main app ko aik acha mamber honay kay natay keh sakta hoo pehli baat kay app ki poem bohat bohat achi thi lakin aap ki poem ki grift mid main aa ker loss ho gai thi lakin end boht umdha tha doosri baat kay itnay especial competeion kay liye ap ko chahiye tha kayapni poem compose ker wa ker submite kerwatay to ziada acha hota jahan rahain bohat bohat ziada khush rahina bohat bohat ziada doaaon kay sath imran |
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#17
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moti ho jao roka kinne hai?? ![]() haan aap haar se bohot kuch seekhte ho balke mera khayal hai k haar hi aapko sikhati hai qk jeet to kabhi kabhi ser ko bhi cherh jati hai ![]() magar tumne acha likha tha isi liye tareef ki thi.. ![]()
__________________ ![]() HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY?? KESE? Q? KAHAN? BATA DOON KIA?? |
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#18
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| salaam mughay nahi lagta k abhi itna sahi likh sakti hon k kisi mukablay main hisa lon,magr aag pahli bar aisa kar rahi hon apni aik choti se kawish k sath hazir hon "MOHUBBAT" YAH JO LAFZ MOHUBBAT HAY PARBATYON SE IS MAIN WASHT HAY AJAB SE JAZBAYON KI SHIDAT HAY MAGAR GANAA MOHUBBAT TO PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY YAH TO APNI APNI KISMAT HAY KISI K LEAY BAY-FEZ ABIDAT HAY KISI KI UMAR BAHR KI RAYZAT HAY MAGAR JANAA MOHUBBAT TO PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY JANAY IS MAIN KHUDA KI KYA HIKMAT HAY MOHUBBAT KARNAY WALAY K MUKDAR MAIN SAKHT AZEAYT HAY MAGAR JANAA MOHUBBAT PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY AHSAS K GAHNAY GUNGLE MAIN ROOH KI BAY NAM MUSAFAT HAY MAGAR JANAA MOHUBBAT PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY LAKHAYON DUKH SAH KAR B LAB PAY NA KOI SHKAYAT HAY K MOHUBBAT KARNAY WALYON KI SADYON SAY YAH RAWAYT HAY BAJA K IS KI RAHYON PER JAFA BHI AIK HAQEQAT HAY MAGAR JANAA MOHUBBAT PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY AYAN IS BAT SAY IS KI AHMEAYT HAY IS JAZBAY KO KHUDA SAY NISBT HAY HAMRA WAGOD SRAA-PA ZILAT HAY US KI ZAT MUGASM RAHMAT HAY YAH GO LAFZ MOHUBBAT HAY PARBATYON SE IS MAIN WASHT HAY AJAB SE JAZBAYON KI SHIDAT HAY MAGAR JANAA MOHUBBAT PAHIR MOHUBBAT HAY!! |
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#19
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| ohhhhhhh really well done bohaat bohat acha likha hai app nay yaqeeenan bohat bohat acha likha hai app nay bohat bohat ziada doaoon kay sath jahaan rahoo bohat khush raho imran |