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(mukalmati)...kaho jana...

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Old 08-22-2007, 03:54 PM
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ek ore kavish k sath hazir hoo mughay persnlyy mukalmati nazam buhat pasand ha so khud b likhi last week kuch mukalmati nazmain read kernay ko mili itni khubsurat poetry read kernay k baad apni post kernay ki himat hi nahi hui ..per abh socha jaisi b ha ap sb say share kerni chahiya apki tareef tanqeed ore guidnes ka intzar rahay ga...
shazlayhassan..


kaho ha mugh say muhabat kaisi
kaha jism mai basti rooh jaisi

kaho seenay mai uthti durd ki lahar kaisi
kaha samandar mai uthtay madojazar jaisi

kaho sansain ha yeh bojhal kaisi
kaha baad barish barhtay habs jaisi

kaho dil say nikelti ha faryad kaisi
kaha gardab mai phansay badban jaisi

kaho hathon mai bichi lakeerain kaisi
kaha luhay kitab pay likhi taqdeerain jaisi

kaho tughay panay ki arzoo kaisi
kaha hawa mai uchalay ek sekay jaisi

kaho apnay milan ki umeed kaisi
kaha hawa mai jaltay ek deep jaisi

kaho yeh muhabat ha cheez kaisi
kaha asman say barstay rizq jaisi

meray dil ki suno ore ...
kaho jana bin meray yeh zindgani kaisi
kaha ,,,,,,,,,,,jana..
ho ek mahi be aab
ho bin wazu k ebadat jaisi...
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Old 08-22-2007, 05:13 PM
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very nice................ .....
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thnxxxxx a lot @yasmine
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bohat khub shazlay very nice
bohat khub
khush rahyee
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wahhh....bhot khoob ....bhot khoob...
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aoa
ek ore kavish k sath hazir hoo mughay persnlyy mukalmati nazam buhat pasand ha so khud b likhi last week kuch mukalmati nazmain read kernay ko mili itni khubsurat poetry read kernay k baad apni post kernay ki himat hi nahi hui ..per abh socha jaisi b ha ap sb say share kerni chahiya apki tareef tanqeed ore guidnes ka intzar rahay ga...
shazlayhassan..


kaho ha mugh say muhabat kaisi
kaha jism mai basti rooh jaisi

kaho seenay mai uthti durd ki lahar kaisi
kaha samandar mai uthtay madojazar jaisi

kaho sansain ha yeh bojhal kaisi
kaha baad barish barhtay habs jaisi

kaho dil say nikelti ha faryad kaisi
kaha gardab mai phansay badban jaisi

kaho hathon mai bichi lakeerain kaisi
kaha luhay kitab pay likhi taqdeerain jaisi

kaho tughay panay ki arzoo kaisi
kaha hawa mai uchalay ek sekay jaisi

kaho apnay milan ki umeed kaisi
kaha hawa mai jaltay ek deep jaisi

kaho yeh muhabat ha cheez kaisi
kaha asman say barstay rizq jaisi

meray dil ki suno ore ...
kaho jana bin meray yeh zindgani kaisi
kaha ,,,,,,,,,,,jana..
ho ek mahi be aab
ho bin wazu k ebadat jaisi...
mashallah....
agar yeh pehli koshish hai to inteha kya ho gi.... bahout saare pyaar aur duaon ke saath meri dua hai ke khoob likho.. haan eik mashwra hai itni achi nazm agar inpage mein likha leen to aur ziyaada nikhar jayeegi meri un dostoon se guzarish hai jo design karte hain ke is nazm mein khubsoorati se design kar ke inheen dil khool ke daad deen..
keep going
dua goo
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kafi acha likha hai ...
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salaam


mukalmaati nazmain likhna asaan nahi hai lekin aap ki ye pehli koshish bauhat umdah hai

khush rahiyai aur likhti rahiyai
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