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This is a discussion on (mukalmati)...kaho jana... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; aoa ek ore kavish k sath hazir hoo mughay persnlyy mukalmati nazam buhat pasand ha so khud b likhi last ...
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| aoa ek ore kavish k sath hazir hoo mughay persnlyy mukalmati nazam buhat pasand ha so khud b likhi last week kuch mukalmati nazmain read kernay ko mili itni khubsurat poetry read kernay k baad apni post kernay ki himat hi nahi hui ..per abh socha jaisi b ha ap sb say share kerni chahiya apki tareef tanqeed ore guidnes ka intzar rahay ga...shazlayhassan.. kaho ha mugh say muhabat kaisi kaha jism mai basti rooh jaisi kaho seenay mai uthti durd ki lahar kaisi kaha samandar mai uthtay madojazar jaisi kaho sansain ha yeh bojhal kaisi kaha baad barish barhtay habs jaisi kaho dil say nikelti ha faryad kaisi kaha gardab mai phansay badban jaisi kaho hathon mai bichi lakeerain kaisi kaha luhay kitab pay likhi taqdeerain jaisi kaho tughay panay ki arzoo kaisi kaha hawa mai uchalay ek sekay jaisi kaho apnay milan ki umeed kaisi kaha hawa mai jaltay ek deep jaisi kaho yeh muhabat ha cheez kaisi kaha asman say barstay rizq jaisi meray dil ki suno ore ... kaho jana bin meray yeh zindgani kaisi kaha ,,,,,,,,,,,jana.. ho ek mahi be aab ho bin wazu k ebadat jaisi...
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#4
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| bohat khub shazlay very nice bohat khub khush rahyee |
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#5
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| wahhh....bhot khoob ....bhot khoob...
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#6
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agar yeh pehli koshish hai to inteha kya ho gi.... bahout saare pyaar aur duaon ke saath meri dua hai ke khoob likho.. haan eik mashwra hai itni achi nazm agar inpage mein likha leen to aur ziyaada nikhar jayeegi meri un dostoon se guzarish hai jo design karte hain ke is nazm mein khubsoorati se design kar ke inheen dil khool ke daad deen.. keep going dua goo irshad qamar
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#8
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| salaam ![]() mukalmaati nazmain likhna asaan nahi hai lekin aap ki ye pehli koshish bauhat umdah hai ![]() khush rahiyai aur likhti rahiyai ![]()
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