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Mukalmati Ghazal

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Old 05-20-2005, 08:23 PM
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Assalam O Alaikum Azizan e Mehfil /rose ....

aap sab ki mashkoor hoon mujhay HG per warm welcome karnay ke liye aur meri pehli post ko itni paziraii denay ke liye /rose

aaj apni likhi hui aik mukalmati ghazal share kar rahi hoon...apni likhi hui ghazliyat main ye ghazal bazat e khud meri favorite hai....infact meray khayal se ye aik hi ghazal hai jo thori behtar likh paaee hoon main......aap sab ke comments ki muntazir rahoon gi

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us ne kaha ke aaNkh main ye nam hai kis liye?
main ne kaha ke paaniyoN se rishta jurr gaya

poocha ke kis tarha se guzarti hai bin meray?
main ne diya jalaya hawaoN main rakh diya

us ne kaha ke yaad bhi mujh ko kiya tha kia?
main ne kaha ke bhoolnay ke waqt kab mila?

poocha guzartay waqt ne kia kia tumhain diya?
bas TUM, TUMHARA SAATH, TUMHARI WAFA, kaha

rishtay badaltay ja rahay hain us ne ye kaha
main ne kaha ke waqt ki hai ye bhi ik adaa

poocha ke kiyun hai aankh main laali rachi hui?
barsoN ke ratt jagoN ka mila hai sila .......kaha

us ne kaha barsaat kiyuN hoti hai ye bata.....?
main ne kaha ke aasmaN rota hai is tarha



is hi mukalmati tasalsul main chand ash'aar aur likhay hain main ne wo post kar rahi hoon..... seniors se islah ki guzarish hai .... kaheen koi kami koi khami nazar aaye to plz mujhay zaroor bataiye ga /rose

gar main na rahooN kia karo gi?us ne ye poocha
jo tuu na ho to zaat meri hai fana, kaha

meray baghair kaisay guzari jo ye poocha
tanhaiyoN ne saath her ik pal diya, kaha

bola ajab ik saher sa is chandni main hai
mujh ko teri aankhoN ka saher khoob hai, kaha

us ne kaha duniya se tumhain dar nahi lagta?
main ne kaha tuu saath ho to dar bhala kaisa?

us ne kaha ham mil na sakay to karo gi kia?
main ne kaha is maamlay ko Rab pe hai chora
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Wah kaya hi kehnay g ,, buhat khoob likha hai /weldone
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AOA... bohat khush amdeed aik baar phir

ghazal..... ghazab ki hay... beintaha khoobsurat har har sher hi umdah hay ... ye jo aap ki um'r 17 saal aa rahi hai likhi ... yaqeen nahi aata k itni si umr main aisa kamal likh leti hain aap..

bohat khush raheye

likhti raheye k bohat acha likhti hain/yhug
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walikumsalam.
bohat acha likha Ap ne
khush rahye or yunhi acha acha likh ker share karti rahye
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wahhhh wahhhhh... HG per aap ka naam doosri baar dekha to ghazal parhnay se pehli hi bohat khushi huyee .. bohat shukria ke aap ne hum sab ka maan rakha... aap ki ghazal ki kya tareef kere'n .. ik ik shair apnay andar jo samandar liye hai .. ussay kaisay koozay mein qaid kere'n... aap yaqeenan kafi bari shaira hain... yun to aap ki ghazal ke tamam ashar hi daad'talab hein... per filhal ye shair to kya hi kehnay

poocha ke kis tarha se guzarti hai bin meray?
main ne diya jalaya hawaoN main rakh diya

iss se barh ker abb aur koi shair kya hoga.. kabhi iss ke sehar se niklay to aagay ki kahe'n gay.. tabb tak ke liye ijazat... bohat shukria @};-

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ahaan bohat khoob likha apne

v nice /clap5

sada khush raho or aise hi acha acha likhti raho(ameen sum ameen) /yhug
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Salam

Adorable Shaira jee HG per aik aur khubsorat izafay ka shukriya aur buhat buhat khushamdeed apki ghazal ka har shair buhat koobsorat aur iski rawani shairi mein apki pukhtagi ka munbolta saboot .... har aik sher apni misal aap phir bhe jo mujhay sab say acha laga

poocha guzartay waqt ne kia kia tumhain diya?
bas TUM, TUMHARA SAATH, TUMHARI WAFA, kaha

Buhat si daad qabool kegiyay @};- aik aur khooborat tehreer kay intezaar kay saath .....

Hamesha muskurati rahiyay AMEEN

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Wah kaya hi kehnay g ,, buhat khoob likha hai /weldone

bohat shukriya paziraii ka /rose

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