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Old 07-21-2007, 10:39 PM
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aslamoalaikum frns kaise ho aap yahan aapni aik poem share kar rahi hoon jo kuch arsa pehle likhi ti



MUJHE AACHA NAHI LAGTA
suno! mujhe aacha nahi lagta

teri ankhoon main basera kare koi

teri ganhi palkoon k neeche dera dale koi

teri nazaroon ka mehwar bane koi

mujhe aacha nahi lagta

tere uljhe bikhre kaam sanware koi

tere kayal main ratoon ko jage koi

tere deedar ki khawish kare koi

mujhe aacha nahi lagta

teri yaad main jala kare koi

teri talab ki dua kare koi

teri such se mehka kare koi

mujhe aacha nahi lagta

mere siwa tujhe chahe koi

tere sung chala kare koi

tere lye saja kare koi

suno! mujhe aacha nahi lagta
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Old 07-21-2007, 10:55 PM
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Walikum Asalam...

achi nazam kahi aapne Sehar... dad qubool kijiye..

likhti rahiye..aur khush rahiye
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Old 07-22-2007, 08:29 AM
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hmmm...acha likha aap ne issi trah likhti rahin
khush rahin aabad rahin
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aslamoalaikum thanks kanwal ji aap ki nazre karam ka
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bahot khoob Sehar saaheba,achhi nazam kahi aap ne,khayaal bahot pasand aaya,jabke ramooz ki tarf abhi khaasi tawajah deney ki zaroorat hai,
bahot khush rahiye,likhti rahiye,
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Old 07-23-2007, 04:26 AM
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buhat umdha


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aslamoalaikum frns kaise ho aap yahan aapni aik poem share kar rahi hoon jo kuch arsa pehle likhi ti



MUJHE AACHA NAHI LAGTA
suno! mujhe aacha nahi lagta

teri ankhoon main basera kare koi

teri ganhi palkoon k neeche dera dale koi

teri nazaroon ka mehwar bane koi

mujhe aacha nahi lagta

tere uljhe bikhre kaam sanware koi

tere kayal main ratoon ko jage koi

tere deedar ki khawish kare koi

mujhe aacha nahi lagta

teri yaad main jala kare koi

teri talab ki dua kare koi

teri such se mehka kare koi

mujhe aacha nahi lagta

mere siwa tujhe chahe koi

tere sung chala kare koi

tere lye saja kare koi

suno! mujhe aacha nahi lagta
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aap sub logon ki ara ki muntazir rahoon gi sehar



meray mutabiq... aap ka khayaal acha hai..... magar baat karnay kay andaz mein rab nahi hai..... aap ko apna khayal... khoabsorat aur aik tarteeb mein dhalnay ki zarorat hai..... kisi teacher se zaroar rahnumai lein....
waisay rahnumai tu mein ne bhi kabhi nahi li...hehehehhehe
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Wah.....Bohat Khooob Likha Hai App Ne. Laken Mujhey Yaad A Raha Hai K Iss Jaisa Kalam Mein Ne Pehly Be Parha Huwa Hai...... Wo Kuch Yun Hai.

Suno Acha Nahi Lagta!
K Koi Dosra Daikhay,
Tumhari Sharbati Ankhain,
Lab-o-Rukhsar or Palkain,
Siyah Lambi Ghanee Zulfain,
Sirahay Doosra Koi,
Mujhay Acha Nahi Lagta.
Suno Acha Nahi Lagta!
Karay Jab Tazkara Koi,
Karay Jab Tabsara Koi,
Tumhari Zaat Ko Khoojay,
Tumhari Baat Ko Soochay, Mujhay Acha Nahi Lagta.
Suno Acha Nahi Lagta!
Tumhari Muskrahat Pr,
Hazaron Log Martay Hon,
Tumhari Aik Aahat Pr,
Hazaron Dil Dharaktay Hon,
Kisi Ka Tum Pe Yun Marna, Mujhay Acha Nahi Lagta.
Suno Acha Nahi Lagta!
Hawa Guzray Tumhain Choo Kr,
Na Hoga Zabt Yeh Mujh Se,
Karay Koi Tumsay Gustakhi,
Tumhari Zulfain Bikhar Ja’ain,
Tumharay Lams Pi Ja’ain, Mujhay Acha Nahi Lagta
Suno Acha Nahi Lagta!
K Tum Ko Phool Be Dakhain,
Tumharay Paas Se Mehkain,
Ya Chanda Ki Guzarish Ho,
K Apni Roshni Bakhshoon,
Rukh-e-Jana Koi Daikhay,
Mujhay Acha Nahi Lagta.


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