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This is a discussion on Mujh se jhagad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Aziizan-e-mehfil Is mehfil mein aata toh rehta huuN lekin apne kalaam ke saath bohat hi taveel arse ke ba’ad haazir ...
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#1
01-25-2008, 06:35 AM
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Aziizan-e-mehfil Is mehfil mein aata toh rehta huuN lekin apne kalaam ke saath bohat hi taveel arse ke ba’ad haazir hua huuN. Zindagi meiN kuch aise halaat se do chaar hua ke zehn-o-dil meiN ek ajeeb si kash-mkash ka aaghaaz ho gaya. Aur ye ghazal bhi hui. Aap sab ki pesh-e-nazar hai. ------------------------- GHAZAL Mujh se jhagad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri kyuuN itna ad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri Mujh se yaqeen uthne laga hai yuuN aajkal Pal-pal bichhad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri Duniya meiN kya chali ye badalaav ki hava Jad se ukhad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri Halaat ne toh unki kamar tod di magar Phir bhi akad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri Meri hi zindagi ke sanwarne ki raah meiN Jaane kyuuN ad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri Aapki aara ka muntazir rahuuNga Praveen Saxena
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#2
01-25-2008, 07:06 AM
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Roz Taro ki numaish "Roz Taro ki numaish main khalal parta hai Chand pagal hai andhere main nkal parta hai Unki yad main aye hai ansu,zara ahista chalo Last edited by armaniboy; 01-25-2008 at 07:10 AM. Reason: 4 Smeone |
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#3
01-25-2008, 07:47 AM
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acha likha aap ne likhtay rahin khush rahin.. 
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#4
01-25-2008, 07:50 AM
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Aadab arz hy Jnab... aap shayad kuch ziada taweel arse baad aa'ay haiN, kyuNkay maiN ne aap ko pehli baar is mehfil meiN dekha aur pehli baar hi aap ki koi kawish paRhi, so ham aapko is mehfil meiN khush-aamadeed kehty haiN... umeid hy aap aap ki sangat meiN hmarara uar aap ka waqt acha guzry ga... baei boaht khoob ghazal kahi hy aap ne... qadry mushkil aur tang qafia chuna mager khoob nibhaya... aap ki mazeed kawishaat ka intzaar rahy ga... likhty raheN aur hamse share krty raheN... khush raheN aabad raheN...
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#5
01-25-2008, 05:01 PM
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Praveen zindagi mein ye sab to laga rehta hai bas Allah per barhosa karian aur ise teragh undah likhtay rahian............bo hat khush rahian |
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01-25-2008, 07:04 PM
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nice one................. ........... |
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#8
01-26-2008, 10:20 PM
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bohat arsay k b'ad aamad hui aapki yahaN.. welkom back.. 1.gif ")1") bohat umda likha aapne.. dad qubool kijiye.. aatay jatay rahiye...khush rahiye
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#9
01-28-2008, 01:40 PM
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bohat Khoob Wah Wah Daad Qubool Karein apna Khayal Rakhyega |
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02-01-2008, 12:41 PM
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Kanwal Saahiba Aapki daad ka shukria. Aage bhi saath diijiyega. Praveen Quote:
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Mujh se jhagad rahi haiN, achchaiyaaN meri 
"Roz Taro ki numaish" 
