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bohat shukriya Khalid

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Hum kiya likh rahay hian?............... . Haqeeqat Koon Likhay Gha?

" Mian yeh kis kay Naam Likhoon Ju Alam Guzar rahay Hian
Meray Shehar Jal rahay Hian meray Loog mar Rahay Hian "

"Muhabbat" or uss say miltay jultay Muzu'aat kye ilawa, kiya yeh hamari Zimadari nahi banti kye humaray likhay huway adab mian Haal ka izhaar ho, mughay tu yehi lagta hia kye sirf woh sha'ir Zinda rehay ghay jo apnay door kay rawi'yyay sye mutabqat rakhay gha..... Hoo sakta hia mian ghalat hoon or Adab sirf " Jazbati taskeen" ka aynadaar hia.

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Readme sahib!
Aap ka kehna aur tashweesh bajja hai aur aap se main mutafiq hooN k mauzoo e shair "Muhabbat" k siwa bhee hona chahiya. Shair ki yeh zimmadaari bhee hai aur ferz bhee k jo MEHSOOS kerta hai woh likhay. Mager sherat MEHSOOS kernay ki hai. Jo jazba ghalib ho ga wohi likhwaee ga aur kisi ko iss ghalbay k against likhwaya nahin ja sakta.
Abb chun K aap ne iss baat ka izhaar mairi nazm k jawab main kiya hai tu main personally aisa kuch kamm likhta hooN aur likhooN bhee tu share nahin kerta iss ki aik barri wajah lack of patience and tolerence hai. Her aik halaat ko apni nazer se daikh raha hota hai jaisay kuch logg iss hakoomat k saath hai bht se against hain. They have their own point of view. Mager problem yeh hoti hai k discussion difference of opinion per lack of tolerence ki wajah se 2 fareqoN main tanazeH ka bais ban jaati hai. DilooN main mai'l aa jata hai. Abb Shairi thehri muhabbat ki zubaan tu iss se ager aisay gunah serzadd honay lagain tu kia hasil. Phir platform ka difference bhee hota hai. Anyhow,
I respect ur criticism and comments but I m sorry to say "Jazbaati Taskeen" muhabbat ki shairi ko aap nahin keh saktay. Iss ka apna muqaam apni value hai. Ho sakta hai aap ki nazer main waqiyaat aur halaat ki numaindgi kernay wala sher hi sher ho mager mairay nazdeek koee bhee paighaam pohanchanay wala sher SHER hai. Aaj k daur ko Faiz aur Jalib derkaar haiN mager yeh bhee sochain k baidaar honay ko tayyar kaun hai.
Khush rehiya

i am not criticising you, mian tu overall addbi rawai'yyay ki baat kar raha hoon.

" Urdu adaab mian "Maa'di Istiara" apnay kamal ko puhanch chuka, or hum abhi tak anhi maa'di Istiaroon mian ghoom phir rahay hian.

App nye buhat acha likha buhat si daad qabool ki jiye....

Bohat shukriya

v.nice that is......!

Bohat shukriya

Bohat shukriya Farrukh

Khush raho bhaee