Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-tahirraza+Nov 8 2003, 02:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (tahirraza @ Nov 8 2003, 02:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> salam


bohoot khoob madiha .. matlay ki kami thi baqi ghazal khoob hey


tahir [/b][/quote]
wsalaam tahir
bahut shukria iss koshish ko sarahnay ka well u know mein shyri mein kuch ziada knowledge nahin rakhti naa just i wrote what i felt at that moment aur issi waja se aksar rules ka shayad khayal nahin rakh pati but thx a lottt for appreciation aur iss ko behter bananay k lia ager koi suggestion hoo app k pass tu i will be waiting for that
take carezzz
Allah hafizz

<!--QuoteBegin-Soft voice+Nov 8 2003, 01:19 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Soft voice @ Nov 8 2003, 01:19 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Salaam Bewafa ji

V nice /happy
bohat achha likha hai
Bohat pasand aaya
keep writing (y)

Soft voice /piano [/b][/quote]
w salaam jee
thx a lottt for appreciating this effort as well
ainda bhi apni ray ka izhar zaroor kertay rehiye ga
take carezzz
best of luck
Allah hafizz

hmmm puri ghazal is just zaberdast beywafa.. kaisi ho >:D< ... hmmm akhri line thori choti nahi hosakti kiya.. ager hojaey tao it will b perfect..dekho bura nahi maana its just my suggestion shayid dosron ki anzur mein perfect ho :")

<!--QuoteBegin-Sanwali+Nov 11 2003, 10:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Sanwali @ Nov 11 2003, 10:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> hmmm puri ghazal is just zaberdast beywafa.. kaisi ho >:D< ... hmmm akhri line thori choti nahi hosakti kiya.. ager hojaey tao it will b perfect..dekho bura nahi maana its just my suggestion shayid dosron ki anzur mein perfect ho :") [/b][/quote]
salaam sanwali dear
mein bilkul theek hoon Allah ka shuker hey tum sunaw....
yar thx a lot for repling to the post ...well iss ki last line ko mein bhi thora change kerna chah rahi thi per u know kafi din se bahut busy hoon online aanay ka bhi time nahin milta issi lia iss ghazal ko bhi theek nahin ker saki ....i will definately take a look at it ......buss yar kaam hi itna hey k ufffff
aur haan mein bilkul bhi mind nahin kerti i always appreciate critical views on my poetry coz issi terha tu behtari aati ehy naaaa....
thx a lottt
take carezzz
Allah hafizzzz