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bohot hi khoob dear bohot acchey

<!--QuoteBegin-BEWAFA+Nov 5 2003, 07:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (BEWAFA @ Nov 5 2003, 07:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> oh hooooo
app kaisay ker saktay hoo meri tareef app ko tu waisay bhi hum jaisoon se beer hey naa i mean bewafwoon se....
khair ager nahin likhna aata mujhay tu koi baat nahin kam az kam app se tu behter hi likh leti hoon gi naaa
waisay jo mein kehna chahti hoon woo app ki iss choti se samajhdaani mein aaye ga nahin coz app sirf biwi per kahi hoi baat hi samajh saktay hoo naaa aur koi baat tu app ka dimagh kabool hi nahin ker sakta anyways thx for the replyy
waisay do u know k mein nay jo aik adad gazal likhi thi app ki ghazal k jawab mein uss ka sher kafi pasand kia sab nay
pata hey kon sa wala

BEWAFA k muqabil jab aaya UDASS
phir kisi k muqabil bhi aaya nahin


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hehe... BEWAFA ji, aap ne wakai bohat achi ghazal likhi hai, so keep writing. Pichle topic par bhi aap se larne mein bohat lutf aaya tha, aur is dafa bhi mein expect kar raha tha ke aap ki taraf se koi dhuaan daar jawab mile ga.

Aur larne mein aap logon ke muqabil koi mard aahi nahin sakta! Agar aap aurton ko larne ke liay border pe bhaij diya hota to ham kab ka Kashmir fatah kar chuke hote :grin

aur waisay wo sheir bhi logon ko bohat pasand aaya tha...

Choti choti baaton pe Khafa hoti hain
Jawani mein dil lagane ki Saza hoti hain
Shetan bhi jis se bhaage wo Balaa hoti hain
Sach kehtay hain log....
Ke larkiyan BEWAFA hoti hain

Aryaa wahhh ji buhaat piyari ghazal likhay hay tum nay /happy .Nazam kay saath saath ab ghazal per bhi haath saaf kiya ja raha hay /luv

Salaam Bewafa ji

V nice /happy
bohat achha likha hai
Bohat pasand aaya
keep writing (y)

Soft voice /piano

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buhat khoob .. /weldone

wah bohot khoob Bewafa /weldone

bohot mushkil zanmeen main aik achi ghazal likhi hai (f) (f)

<!--QuoteBegin-Dream Catcher+Nov 6 2003, 06:45 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Dream Catcher @ Nov 6 2003, 06:45 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Yaar sisoo kuch khas maza nahi aya aur abhi merey khayal main kafi islah talab hey kuch mazeed nazr-e-sani karo is pay but over all kafi acchi koshish hey aur jis tarhaN nazm acchi kehti ho Inshallah ghazal pay bhi uboor ho jaey gaa yaa phir ghazal he UBOOR ho jaey gee

Khush Raho Hamesha
/luv [/b][/quote]
salaam brother
kaisay hein app?? well mujhay bhi iss mein kafi flaus nazar aa rahay hein tu app kyoun iss ko theek nahin ker rahay kam az kam kuch tu app k baray honay ka faida hona chahiye naa
plz brother mujhay bhi koi mashwara dein kaisay iss ko behter kia ja sakta ehy
thx for the reply and encouragement
take carezzz