Urdu Poetry Forum

Assalamu alikum sab khuwateen o Hazarat

aj pehli baar yaha aai hoon, or shaid dobara APNAY liay to na hi aaon
kuch arsa pehlay 1 bhai sahab ko khush krnay k liay batoob batoon may 1 nazam banay ki koshish ki thi, pir yeah nazam Paper may bhi publish ho gai keh apna page tha os waqt, or paper may janay sya pehlay check krnay k liay jin ki nazer say guzri vo bila shuba yaha pay AADB may kafi ajay ki cheez hain,sorry , mayra matlab Shair bhi hain or naser may bhi on ka yaha pr nam ha,
so on k hathon say ho kr yeah nazam pass ho gai, mujhy bohat khushi hoi , kunkeh yeah ZINDAGI may mayri pehli nazam thi or kamal yeah ha keh Shairi or may.....
thori mushkil c hi baat ha
khair, os k bad 1 or SHaair hazret ko dikhai gai thi yeah nazam , yaha share krnay ka maqsed bhi on ki hi baat say mila humain,
onhoon nay yeah poem parh kr kuch uu kaha tah keh "nazam to achi ha or os ka Concept bhi bohata acha sa ha "mosam k sath ki baykhudi" achi bayan ki ha but kuch alfaz ki tarash baqi ha,"
i think kuch aysa hi kaha tha
bayher hal, taqrer ka khulasa kuch uu ha keh, mujhy laaga agr koi or acha sa shaaair, matalb koi bakamal, or jo is mozoo ko samjh kr is pr Behtareen andaz may kalam chala sakay to...... mayra kia giya, haan kisi ko kuch mil zaror jay ga
matlab koi is mozon ko samjh kr ager aysay hi andaz may likay ga to is say hazaaar zadjay acha likahy ga, or cheez hazaar darja achi ho to hi cheez "cheez" hoti ha, mayra maqsed yeah ha keh koi is pr likhna chahay to likhay , yaqeenan mujh say kahiiiiiiiiiiiii zada khubsorat bayan karain gay ap log , or mujhy parh kr khushi ho gi keh jo may byan krna chah rahi thi kisi or nay hi shai laykain akaml ka kaha
bas yahi maqsed tha mayra
shukriya taqrer sonnay ka , mafii chahati hoon lambi ho gai
ijazet
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sab ka
Rab Rakha

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nahi poetry Krti nahi hoon dear KI THI
Thanks , mayra khiyal tha normal c ha, thanks dear

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Thank u Zaib sahab,
hum kabhi is section may ay nahi, kunkeh shairi say itna lagao nahi
laykin ap POET hain yaha keh,itna Nazer aa raha ha ap kay koi bhi comments her banday k liya ayhem hoon gay , mayray liya bhai hain , bohat bohat shukriya daad daynay ka
agya ka pata nahi,
pehli baat , alfaz nahi itnay, dosri baat, Qawaed ka shaoor nahi, tiri baat , na maloom kon c baat wazen dayti ha kon c nahi,
jis cheez ki alif bay hi na janatay hoon os pr zor zaber dasti kr k ku achay logon ki baduaaina loon :D
bayher hal , ap nay yaha comments diya, mujhy waqai DIli khushi hoi
Shukriya

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walikum asalam..

sab say pehlay... is mehfil maiN khush amdeed ..

apki nazm parhi.. khayal bohat lubhaya... pehli nazm hai.. to phir to aur bhi achi hai.. insan naya shayer ho ya purana.. acha ho ya bura.. seekhnay ka amal to humaisha hi jari rehta hai... un shayer sahab ne baja farmaya k tarashnay ki zaroorat hai...

har shayer ko is marhalay say guzarna parta hai... mera mashwara yehi hai k ap likhnay ka amal jari rakhaiN, achay sho'ra ka kalam parhaiN... phir jab aj say 4, 6 mah bad ap is nazm ko daikhaiN gi... to apko aihsas hoga k kahaN kis cheez ki kami hai..

kuch samajh na aaye to hum sab apki madad k liye mojood haiN...

khush rahiye

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Sahi kaha app ne mehrooooo