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RulesThis is a discussion on mizaaj-e-dost samjha ja chuka hy within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; As-salam-o-alaikum aj aap se aik ghazal share kr raha huN, ghazal bhi kya hy, bas bateN hi haiN... so berdasht ...
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#1
02-19-2008, 11:00 AM
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As-salam-o-alaikum aj aap se aik ghazal share kr raha huN, ghazal bhi kya hy, bas bateN hi haiN... so berdasht kiji'ye... k mujhy to esi hi bateN krni aati haiN   mizaaj-e-dost samjha ja chuka hy so ab khud ko sambhala ja chuka hy mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko, wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy misaal-e-oos thy neindoN pe kuch khawb, ab un khawboN ko masla ja chuka hy palatny k li'ye umriaN haiN der-kaar wo mujh se dur itna ja chuka hy bas ab us ko ye batlana hy baqi, usy dil se nikala ja chuka hy yahaN se ab nahiN uThny k ye log, yahaN ser ko jhukaya ja chuka hy koi surat nahiN inkaar ki ab, keh khul kr muskaraya ja chuka hy ada hony ko hy ik lafz faizan, kamaaN pr teer khaincha ja chuka hy
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) Last edited by WanderingThoughts; 02-19-2008 at 11:49 AM.                  |
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02-19-2008, 11:45 AM
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wa-alikumsalam bas ab us ko ye batlana hy baqi, usy dil se nikala ja chuka hy wahhh...Faizan sahib bohat khoob..kia he kehnay bohat he shaandar ghazal kahi hai pori ki pori lakin ye shair bohat bhaya...dad qabol kijiye 
__________________  Ab os k baad laga DiL to DiL lagi hogi Hum os pe apni mohabt tamaam kr aaye...!  |
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02-19-2008, 12:51 PM
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mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko, wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy palatny k li'ye umriaN haiN der-kaar wo mujh se dur itna ja chuka hy Wah wah wah janab.....aap ki ghazal to hamesha ki tarah shahkaar hai hi magar ooper likhe gaye do ash'aar to ghazab ke hain.....poori ghazal ke liye aur specially in do ash'aar ke liye bohot si daad hazir-e-khidmat hai
__________________ ******************** ******************** **** Adaab teri bazm ke jeenay nahiN daitay DeewanoN ko jeenay ki tamanna to baRi hay (Qabil Ajmeri) |
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02-19-2008, 07:22 PM
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bohat achi gazal parhne ko mili faizan bahi aap ki taraf se many congratz khush rahiye
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02-19-2008, 08:43 PM
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mizaaj-e-dost samjha ja chuka he so ab khud ko sambhala ja chuka he Wah Kiya Kamal Gazal ap ne likhe he Janab MashaAllah youn lagta he ke mare dill ke bat ap ne is gazal men likh de he janab is gazal ka aggaz jahan se keya he ap ne wo lafz he kamal hen Mizaj-e-Dost Samjha Ja Choka he wah Mashaallah lafz nahe hen ke men kuch likhon mukhtasar ke Allah ap ko dheron khoshiyan Naseeb farmaye ore ap ko hamesha likhte rahne ke himat ore taqat aata farmaye ye gazal dill ko choo gaye he dheron Daad Qabol Farmayen .....!  |
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02-19-2008, 09:46 PM
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Faizaan saheb, Buhat hi khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aap nay youn tu saray hi ash'aar pasand aaey laikin yeh shair khas taur par pasand aaya. mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko, wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy Bharpoor daad is kalam par. Anis Hasan |
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02-19-2008, 09:51 PM
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Bayhadd umdaah ghazal hai aap ki faizaan bhaee mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko, wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy Bayhadd aala o umdaah Khush rehiya
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02-20-2008, 04:54 AM
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bas ab us ko ye batlana hy baqi, usy dil se nikala ja chuka hy misaal-e-oos thy neindoN pe kuch khawb, ab un khawboN ko masla ja chuka hy wha buhat umdha
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mizaaj-e-dost samjha ja chuka hy 
