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Old 02-22-2008, 05:14 PM
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Buhat he khoobsurat...very touchy!!!
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ada hony ko hy ik lafz faizan,
kamaaN pr teer khaincha ja chuka hy

aay hay fazian bhai
yeh teer goya parhnay wala kay dill per khencha gia
kia hi kiehnay is shair kay
wah wah lutf aa gia yeh shair parh kar
aab zara pori ghazal ka postmartum ho jay
mizaaj-e-dost samjha ja chuka hy
so ab khud ko sambhala ja chuka hy

wah janab boht hi khoob goya ishq majazi nay
ik hi jast main ishq e haqiqi ki taraf miraajat kar li
mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko,
wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy

khud fareebi ka naqsha khenchna koi aap say seekhay goya
teray aanay ka dhoka saa raha
dia sa sari raart jalta raha

misaal-e-oos thy neindoN pe kuch khawb,
ab un khawboN ko masla ja chuka hy

wah jaan sooz mehromi ki kia sorat gari ki aap nay
palatny k li'ye umriaN haiN der-kaar
wo mujh se dur itna ja chuka hy

khoob kahi yaqqen or bey yaqeeni kay darmian
kitni haad e fazil hay sab waazah ho gia.
bas ab us ko ye batlana hy baqi,
usy dil se nikala ja chuka hy

goya yeh matlab hoa baqool e ghalib
goyam mushkil o na goyam mushkil
yahaN se ab nahiN uThny k ye log,
yahaN ser ko jhukaya ja chuka hy

khoob kahi
koi surat nahiN inkaar ki ab,
keh khul kr muskaraya ja chuka hy

goya raaz e tabasum ham paa bhi gay
boht hi zabardast
boht khobsorat
dher sari daad aap ki kawash ki nazar
kush rahain likhtay rahain
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palatny k li'ye umriaN haiN der-kaar
wo mujh se dur itna ja chuka hy

bas ab us ko ye batlana hy baqi,
usy dil se nikala ja chuka hy
mujhay ye ashaar bohat he zayada achay lagay..............w aisay tou saree ghazal he awesome hai........
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kia kehnay haiN aapki batoN k... jab bataiN itni khubsoorat haiN to shayeri ka aalam kia hoga..

mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko,
wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy

palatny k li'ye umriaN haiN der-kaar
wo mujh se dur itna ja chuka hy

wahhhhh wahhhh... bohat hi khubsooorat.... yooN to tamam tar ghazal hi bohat dilkash hai magar yeh ash'ar khas taur par pasand aaye balkay.. bohat pasand aaye..

bohat khush rahiye

ji shukriya... ager kabhi shairi kr paya to wo bhi aap sab se share kruN ga, abhi to bas ye bateN hi berdasht kreN....

itni hosla-afzaei ka bohat bohat shukriya... Allah Talaa aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy..
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Aap Ki Likhi Her Ghazal Aik Say Barh Kay Aik Hoti Hay...Is Ghazal Nay Bhi Bouhat Mutasir Kiya...Aap Ki Likhi Khoobsurat Ghazlo'n Mai'n Aik Umda Izafa...Bouhat Si Daad Qubool Kijiye...Allah Aap Ko Sada Khush Rakhay...

Haya Sahiba aap ka bohat shukriya k aap ne meri ghazal ko paRha aur apni ra'ye di... hosla afzaei k li'ye khas kr bohat nawazish... Allah Taala ap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...
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bohat khoob faizan sahab aap ki yeh batein bohat achi thin aese hi batein karte rahye sada khush rahye
apna khayal rakhyega

Maria sahiba ap ne ghazal paRhi aur isy pasand kiya is k liye bohat bohat shukryia... ji maiN aisi hi bateN krta rahuN ga... Allah Taala aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...
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Buhat he khoobsurat...very touchy!!!
thanks alot jnab, k ap ne meri ghzal paRhi aur isy pasand kiya..... khush raheN aabad raheN...
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ada hony ko hy ik lafz faizan,
kamaaN pr teer khaincha ja chuka hy

aay hay fazian bhai
yeh teer goya parhnay wala kay dill per khencha gia
kia hi kiehnay is shair kay
wah wah lutf aa gia yeh shair parh kar
aab zara pori ghazal ka postmartum ho jay
mizaaj-e-dost samjha ja chuka hy
so ab khud ko sambhala ja chuka hy

wah janab boht hi khoob goya ishq majazi nay
ik hi jast main ishq e haqiqi ki taraf miraajat kar li
mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko,
wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy

khud fareebi ka naqsha khenchna koi aap say seekhay goya
teray aanay ka dhoka saa raha
dia sa sari raart jalta raha

misaal-e-oos thy neindoN pe kuch khawb,
ab un khawboN ko masla ja chuka hy

wah jaan sooz mehromi ki kia sorat gari ki aap nay
palatny k li'ye umriaN haiN der-kaar
wo mujh se dur itna ja chuka hy

khoob kahi yaqqen or bey yaqeeni kay darmian
kitni haad e fazil hay sab waazah ho gia.
bas ab us ko ye batlana hy baqi,
usy dil se nikala ja chuka hy

goya yeh matlab hoa baqool e ghalib
goyam mushkil o na goyam mushkil
yahaN se ab nahiN uThny k ye log,
yahaN ser ko jhukaya ja chuka hy

khoob kahi
koi surat nahiN inkaar ki ab,
keh khul kr muskaraya ja chuka hy

goya raaz e tabasum ham paa bhi gay
boht hi zabardast
boht khobsorat
dher sari daad aap ki kawash ki nazar
kush rahain likhtay rahain

primitive ji