Urdu Poetry Forum

**WanderingThoughts** · #11 02-21-2008, 08:29 AM

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Originally Posted by Saraabs

mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko,
wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy

palatny k li'ye umriaN haiN der-kaar
wo mujh se dur itna ja chuka hy

Wah wah wah janab.....aap ki ghazal to hamesha ki tarah shahkaar hai hi magar ooper likhe gaye do ash'aar to ghazab ke hain.....poori ghazal ke liye aur specially in do ash'aar ke liye bohot si daad hazir-e-khidmat hai

saraabz bhai is qadar hosla-afzaei k il'ye maiN aap ka shuker-guzar huN, aap k ye lafz ham jesy na'ye likhny waloN k li'ye tehreek ka ba'ish banty haiN... aur mazeed kuch likhny ka jazba paida hota hy, so aap ka bohat shukriya...

Allah Taala aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...

**WanderingThoughts** · #12 02-21-2008, 08:36 AM

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Originally Posted by dua_e_sehar

bohat achi gazal parhne ko mili faizan bahi aap ki taraf se
many congratz
khush rahiye

aap ka ghazal paRhny aur pasand krny ka bohat shukriya... Allah Taala aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...

**WanderingThoughts** · #13 02-21-2008, 11:08 AM

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Originally Posted by Men Hon Na

mizaaj-e-dost samjha ja chuka he
so ab khud ko sambhala ja chuka he

Wah Kiya Kamal Gazal ap ne likhe he Janab MashaAllah youn lagta he ke mare dill ke bat ap ne is gazal men likh de he janab is gazal ka aggaz jahan se keya he ap ne wo lafz he kamal hen Mizaj-e-Dost Samjha Ja Choka he wah Mashaallah lafz nahe hen ke men kuch likhon mukhtasar ke Allah ap ko dheron khoshiyan Naseeb farmaye ore ap ko hamesha likhte rahne ke himat ore taqat aata farmaye ye gazal dill ko choo gaye he dheron Daad Qabol Farmayen .....!

As-salam-o-alaikum Jnab, bohat shukriya k aap ne meri kawish ko paRha aur usy itni pazeeraei bakhshi... duaoN ka khas kr bohat shukriya.... Allah Taala aap ko kamyabiyaN ata kary, aur shaad-o-abad rakhy...

**WanderingThoughts** · #14 02-21-2008, 11:12 AM

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Originally Posted by Anis Hasan

Faizaan saheb,

Buhat hi khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aap nay youn tu saray hi ash'aar pasand aaey laikin yeh shair khas taur par pasand aaya.

mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko,
wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy

Bharpoor daad is kalam par.

Anis Hasan

Anis Bhai bohat bohat shukriya k aap ne meri kawish ko pasand kiya... Allah taala aap ko shaad-o-aabad rakhy...

**WanderingThoughts** · #15 02-21-2008, 11:14 AM

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Originally Posted by Aatif Saeed

Bayhadd umdaah ghazal hai aap ki faizaan bhaee

mery sab raasty az-ber haiN us ko,
wo mujh meiN itni baar aa jaa chuka hy

Bayhadd aala o umdaah

Khush rehiya

hostal afzaei aur pasandeedgi ka bohat shukriay Atif bhai... khush raheN aabad raheN...

**WanderingThoughts** · #16 02-21-2008, 11:15 AM

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Originally Posted by asif shahzad

bas ab us ko ye batlana hy baqi,
usy dil se nikala ja chuka hy

misaal-e-oos thy neindoN pe kuch khawb,
ab un khawboN ko masla ja chuka hy

wha buhat umdha

ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka bohat shukriya Asif sahab.. khush raheN aabad raheN...

**WanderingThoughts** · #17 02-21-2008, 11:18 AM

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Originally Posted by Pathar Dil

Wa'salam...
bahut khoobsoorat ghazal kahi hai aap ney... or ager ye baten to phir b kamal hain...

Atif bhai aap ne ghazal paRhi aur isy pasand kiya, is ka bohat shukriya, bas ye bateN hi haiN.... aur ye bateN esi bateN haiN, jo bas bateN hi bateN haiN...

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