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RulesThis is a discussion on misra' e tarah: wafa karay na karay phir bhee yaar apna hay within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; aik ghazal kay saath hazir huwa hooN............ehba b kee araa ka muntazir rahoonga:::: khul ke qainchee chalayeay........... ..jo bura lagay ...
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03-16-2006, 11:19 PM
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aik ghazal kay saath hazir huwa hooN............ehba b kee araa ka muntazir rahoonga:::: khul ke qainchee chalayeay........... ..jo bura lagay nishandahee kijiay.............. .... aapka dost sabeehuddin shoaiby ye dil jo aaj bohat beqarar apna hay naseeb aaj bhee phir intizaar apna hay jo yaar khush hay tu phir burg o baar apna hay wagarna ghur wohi burq o sharar apna hay wafa guzeedoN meN jab se shumaar apna hay her aik shakhs yahaN ghum gusaar apna hay janab e mush ka ye kehna hay bush ke dauray per wafa karay na karay phir bhee yaar apna hay ye teray ishq ka faizan hay meray humdum gali gali meN jo ye ishtahar apna hay badan meN zehr jo utra wo ghair ka kab hay jo aasteeN meN chupa hay wo maar apna hay kisee ko yaad kareN kia, kisay bhulayeN hum ke apne dil pe kahaN ikhtiyar apna hay badal ke roop jhalakta hay apnay she’roN meN gham e hayat, gham e rozgar apna hay watan ka baal bhee baNka na ker sakay koee ke is ke gird ye sangeeN hisaar apna hay sabeeh khud meN bohat mohtaram heN hum ab bhee waqar ab bhee kahiN burqarar apna hay
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03-16-2006, 11:28 PM
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bauhat hi achi kavish hai aap ki khayab bhi umdah hai  khush rahiyai 1.gif ")1")
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03-17-2006, 01:06 AM
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03-17-2006, 04:25 AM
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 Mohteram Sabeeh saahab ... Sab se pehle to HG per khuSh.aamdeed Tarhii misra kaa haq ne ba.Khoobii nibhaayaa hai ... Kisi aik sher ko haaSil-e.Ghazal muntaKhib kerna naa.insaafii hogii kyuN.kee her sher apnii jagah mukammal hai aur be.micaal hai Bohot saarii daad qubool keejiay Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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03-17-2006, 04:35 AM
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qasim bhaee bohat bohat shukriyaaa.......... ..ager aap ne tareef kii hay tu yaqenan aisa hee hoga.........baraye meharbani agar behar meN koi jhol dikhayee day tu usay kasnay meN madad dijiay |
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03-17-2006, 04:47 AM
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Iss sher k misra-e.awwal k aaKhir meN gaRbaR hai ... Bara-e.meherbaanii iss par nazar-e.caanii Daal laiN: jo zehr jism meN utra wo aur kia hay bhala jo aasteeN meN chupa hay wo maar apna hay Qassim Mirza :Qassim: |
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03-17-2006, 03:05 PM
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 1 ..keep writing ...
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03-17-2006, 09:01 PM
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buhat hi khubdurat likha hain ap ne sahib, parh kar buhat lutf aya  meri taraf se buhat sari dad qabool faramein  khush rahaein  
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