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This is a discussion on meri rooh within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; meri rooh nikal nay ko hogi meri saans bikhar nay ko hogi phir daman zindgi ka chotay ga phir dhaga ...
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| meri rooh nikal nay ko hogi meri saans bikhar nay ko hogi phir daman zindgi ka chotay ga phir dhaga sans ka jo totay ga phir wapis hem na aain gay phir hem se koi na rootay ga phir aankhon main noor na hoga phir dil gham se choor na ho ga uspal tum hem ko thamo gay hem se dost epna mango gay per hem na kuch bhi bolain gay ankhain bhi na kholain gay uspal tum roo do gay hem ko tum khoo do gay |
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| buhat umdha .............
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#6
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| achhi koshish hai janaab, ustaad sho.ra ko ziyaada se ziyaada pariye,aor wazn/behar ko samajhtey huye likhney ki koshish kijiye,bahot behtari paayain ge kalaam main, ![]() bahot khush rahiye, ![]()
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#7
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| Asif Bhai tareef kernay ka shukriya, bes ap ki tawaju chahye... |
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#8
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| very nice guru sahab bhuat achi nazam lekhi hai tujh se bichrey hain to ye alam hai her ek ke ghum se jaisey Ashnai ho
__________________ ( Saqib Sahili ) Jo bhi hai magar kyun hai, ek bar bata dey Mery pas tery na hone ka koi to sabab ho |