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**guru449** · #11 03-19-2008, 05:21 AM

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Originally Posted by frhan

excellent......keep it up

Frhan

shukriya, aap bhi likh ker sab se share ki jiye...

**guru449** · #12 03-19-2008, 05:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zain

achhi koshish hai janaab,
ustaad sho.ra ko ziyaada se ziyaada pariye,aor wazn/behar ko samajhtey huye likhney ki koshish kijiye,bahot behtari paayain ge kalaam main,
bahot khush rahiye,

zain bhai thanx for ur guidance, I'll try to improve as per ur suggestion.

**guru449** · #13 03-19-2008, 11:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tufan

buhat umdha ............

pasendeedgi ka shukriya

**guru449** · #14 03-21-2008, 03:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by raj-truefriend

bahot khub....kya kahena aapka...

shukriya

May U Have a good time here.

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