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RulesThis is a discussion on Meri Qismat Ka Likha Meray Hi Ansoo Mia Gaye ..... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; aaj main phir himmat kar k apni aik poetry share karney ja rahi hoon .... umeed karti hoon k is ...
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#1
12-30-2007, 11:24 AM
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 aaj main phir himmat kar k apni aik poetry share karney ja rahi hoon ....  umeed karti hoon k is baar bhi aap loug meri hosla afzai k saah saath meray galtiyoun per bhi roshni dalein gey ....  Meri qismat ka likha meray hi aansoo mita gaye Kuch is tarah bahey key sab armaan duba gaye Yarooun ney bhi kya khoub nibhaii hai dosti Manzil dikha key raah main kaantey bicha gaye Khuwaaboun ka tootna bhi koi khuwaab nahin hai Tootey kuch is tarah key haqeeqat dikha gaye Himmat juta key utaari jo kashti samundr main Har simt sey mayoosi key toofan aa gaye Khushiyoun ki ho aahat to dil jata hai ab seham Hum dard apney dil main itney basa gaye Sab kuch luta key phir sey lutney kohain tayyar Hum woh hain jo sab paa k bhi sab kuch ganwa gaye  
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12-30-2007, 12:25 PM
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Lo woh aik baar phir bahaar laut ker aagayi hai, Duniya ki wahi raunak aur dil ki wahi tanhai.... Bahut khoob Igni.....Awesome poetry !!! 1.gif ")1") |
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12-30-2007, 01:23 PM
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 very nice... poetry ka khayal bahut acha hia...ek do jaga pe wazan me prob hai...otherwise ghazal achi hai...keep it up 
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12-30-2007, 05:25 PM
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thnxz mefoo ....  by the way yehshayr kis ka hai .....  Last edited by ignited_mind; 12-30-2007 at 05:29 PM. |
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12-30-2007, 05:28 PM
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thnxzz PD ..... bas khayal hi achey hotey hain  baqi tou  wazan ki problem to hamesha hi hoti hai ... meray zehan main jo bhi aata hai bas likh daiti hoon.... zameen beher wazan in sab cheezoun kaahista ahista pata chal raha hai ....  thnxz once again ...  |
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12-30-2007, 05:30 PM
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Tumhe kya lagta hai jaani.....?  |
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12-30-2007, 05:49 PM
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chacha ghalib ka tou nahin lagta kahin tum ka tou nahin  |
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12-30-2007, 05:51 PM
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Meri Qismat Ka Likha Meray Hi Ansoo Mia Gaye ..... 
Re: Meri Qismat Ka Likha Meray Hi Ansoo Mia Gaye ..... 
