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Meri Nazm

This is a discussion on Meri Nazm within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam Alaikum....Bohot darte darte apni ek nazm is bazm me post kar rahe hain....kaisi lagi khule dil se baatyen...admiration aur ...


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Old 05-18-2008, 05:47 PM
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Assalam Alaikum....Bohot darte darte apni ek nazm is bazm me post kar rahe hain....kaisi lagi khule dil se baatyen...admiration aur criticism dono ka intezar rahega....

E meri rage jaan me basne wale
kis tarha mai tujhe bataun ke
tu mere jism me daure hai
lahu ke sang sang

mehak raha hai mera qalb
teri khushboo se
har taraf phaile hain
teri nigahon ke rang


badli badli si meri zaat
nazar aati hai
chand ko dekh kar ruk jati hai dhadkan meri
thehri thehri si har raat nazar aati hai

ajab si halchal shehr-e-dil me hoti hai
jab bhi E dil ke makin tujhse nigaah milti hai
band hothon ke qafl yunhi thartharate hain
jhukti palkon se har baat ayaan hoti hai


kitne razon ko tafseer ataa karti hain
jumbish-e-lab nahi hoti to phir
ye khud hi waadon ko wafa karti hain







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Walekum Aslaam,
sab se pehley to aap ko is mehfil main teh dil se khushh aamdeed,
aap ki nazam paRi,bahot achhi lagi,so daad qabool kijiye,
umeed hai ke aap ka mazeed kalaam bhi paRney ko milta rahey ga,
bahot khush rahiye,
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Walekum Aslaam,
sab se pehley to aap ko is mehfil main teh dil se khushh aamdeed,
aap ki nazam paRi,bahot achhi lagi,so daad qabool kijiye,
umeed hai ke aap ka mazeed kalaam bhi paRney ko milta rahey ga,
bahot khush rahiye,
Bohot bohot shukriya Zain jee...aap bhi khush rahen.Ameen
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bohat khub................ daad ke saath khush rahian
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very very nice................ ...............
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bohat khub................ daad ke saath khush rahian
Shukriyaa jii.........
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Shahabaashi qabool karanain janab....
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Shahabaashi qabool karanain janab....
Thanx ji...............
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buhat khoob sarah
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