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This is a discussion on meri maan muj say poochti hai within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; <TABLE class=forumline cellSpacing=1 cellPadding=3 width="100%" border=0><TBODY><TR> <TD class=row1 vAlign=top align=left width=150> </TD><TD class=row1 vAlign=top width="100%" height=28><TABLE cellSpacing=0 cellPadding=0 width="100%" border=0><TBODY><TR> ...
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| <TABLE class=forumline cellSpacing=1 cellPadding=3 width="100%" border=0><TBODY><TR> <TD class=row1 vAlign=top align=left width=150> </TD><TD class=row1 vAlign=top width="100%" height=28><TABLE cellSpacing=0 cellPadding=0 width="100%" border=0><TBODY><TR> <TD width="100%"> meri sooji hue bay ronaq aankhoon ki wajah meri ujri hue pheeki hunsi ki sabub may tumhain kaisay bataoon maan may kaisay sumhjaoon may nay in aankhoon may kitnay aansoo tum say chupa k rukhay hain kitnay zakhum khultay hain jub yeh hont hunstay hain may kaisay bataoon maan may bay aitbar hue hoon mera yakeen toota hai wo ghair nahi tha mujay kisi apnay nay loota hai may kia sumhjaoon maan teri beti ko taqdeer nay kahan la k huraya hai meray samnay meray haath say mera sub kuch churaya hai may kaisay bataoon maan yeh choat bohut gahri hai aur derd bohut hota hai maan tu jhlail hi nahi paye gi jaisay dil mera rota hai maan may kuch bata nahi paoon gi mujay bus tu chup rahnay day yeh derd mera muqudder hai mujay mauqadder sahnay day </TD></TR></TBODY></TABLE></TD></TR></TBODY></TABLE>
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| very nice sharing janab very nice bohat umdha khialat ore boht umdha alfaaz really well done boht bohat ziada daad qabool kerin meri terf say ore umeed hai kayisi terha sharring kertay rehain gay hum sub say bohta bohat ziada duaan kay sath jahan rahin bohat khush rahin imran
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| Kia Kahoon Lufz Sill Sey Gaeyey Heyn Sirf Lufz Maa Hii,,,,,,,,,@};- Likh Naheyn Paoon Ga Khush Raho Sadda Aur Itna Hii Kahoon Ga Key Itna Ooper Jaoo Key Tum Sey Milneyn Kii Loug Hasrat Kareyn Na Kamzoor Samjhoo Khud Koo Aur ,,,,,,,,,,kuch Naheyn @};-
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| wahhhhh...dil maiN utarti huwi bataiN...jumlay...ai hsasat...bohat ziada touching...bohat khubsoorat ...bohat hi khoob... ![]() khush raho
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| Aas bohat khoob nazm kahi hy... jazboN se bharpoor... yaqeenan aap k dil ki aawaaz hy... ager isy ap k mehsoosaat ki tarjuman samjha ja'y to waqai aik mukamal kawish hy... lekin ager maiN isy aik aazaad nazm k tor pr parhoN to mujhy mehsoos ho raha hy k nazm ka ikht'taam utna pur-asar aur bhar'poor nahi hy jis qadar is nazm ka aaghaaz hy... (ye meri zaati ra'y hy...) Allah Mola aap ko is se bhi achy andaaz maiN apny jazbaat ko bayan krny ka huner aur hosla ata kary.... khush raho, aabaad raho... aur youNhi likhti raho....
__________________ ------------------------------------------------- Bedil libaas-e-zeest bohat deeda-zeb tha aur ham ne is libaas ko ulTa pehan liya... (Bedil Haidri) |
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| Buhat khooob Buhat umdah nazam kahi aap nay dil ko cho janay wali , aik kaifiat si tari ho gai hai jis ka koi naam nahin hai siwaey Udasi k Buhat khush rahiey aur aisay he shairy main apnay dil ki kaifiat ko raqam kerti rahiey..... k shairy marham bhi hai. Regards Samra
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| very nice and beautiful sharing
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