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This is a discussion on Meri jaaN ye mera kamaal tha within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Tujhe aik bhi na safayee di, meri jaaN ye mera kamaal tha Tujhe dostoN pe yaqeen tha, mujhe dushmanoN ka ...
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#1
11-20-2007, 09:45 PM
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Tujhe aik bhi na safayee di, meri jaaN ye mera kamaal tha Tujhe dostoN pe yaqeen tha, mujhe dushmanoN ka khayal tha BaNTeeN shehr maiN, jo ra'ayateN, to panaah DhoonD li dasht maiN Wo kisi ka rehm-o-karam sahi, ye meri anaa ka sawaal tha Wo jo lamha bhar ki bahaar thi, meri umr bhar ka hisaar thi Na naye guloN ki talab koi, na khizaaN ka koi malaal tha Tere mausamoN ka har aik pal, meri yaad maiN tha saja hua Mujhe is se koi gharaz na thi, wo firaaq tha ke wisaal tha Bhala waqt se maiN DarooNga kia, kabhi khauf iska karooNga kia Jise haNs ke maiN ne chuna tha khud, wahi iska ghaiz-o-jalaal tha Kisi aur ka bhi ye haal ho, to ye dil na itna niDhaal ho Meri bad naseebi to ye hui, maiN khud aap apni misaal tha Mujhe ilm tha, maiN Saraab tha, so naseeb mera kharaab tha Wo jo raiza raiza hawa maiN tha, wahi mera khwab-o-khayal tha
__________________ ******************** ******************* MaiN bulata to hooN usko magar aye jazba-e-dil Us pe ban jaye kuch aisi ke bin aaye na banay (Ghalib) Last edited by Saraabs; 11-21-2007 at 05:44 PM.         |
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11-21-2007, 05:07 AM
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ohh very nice but very sad ghazal bohat pasand aie really bohat ziada daad qabool keirn isi terha likhtay rehiye ga bohat bohat ziada duaon kay sath jahan rahin bohat bohat khush rahin emmran
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#3
11-21-2007, 10:00 AM
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Tujhe aik bhi na safayee di, meri jaaN ye mera kamaal tha Tujhe dostoN pe yaqeen tha, mujhe dushmanoN ka khayal tha Bhala waqt se maiN DarooNga kia, kabhi khauf iska karooNga kia Jise haNs ke maiN ne chuna tha khud, wahi iska ghaiz-o-jalaal tha kia kehne hai.N sir bohut khub kaha he , poori ghazal he achi he mager ye do sher kamal hain |
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11-21-2007, 10:49 AM
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good really nice sharing.... |
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11-21-2007, 05:46 PM
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11-21-2007, 05:50 PM
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11-21-2007, 05:52 PM
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#8
11-21-2007, 06:07 PM
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...mujhe dushmano ka khayal tha wahhhhh.. bohat khoob.. ghazal pasand aayee.. bohat si daad-o-tehseen hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. Bohat Shukria..  wafa aur dua ke saath withlove
__________________  .......JI RAHAY HEIN KAMAL KERTAY HEIN....... |
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11-21-2007, 09:53 PM
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#10
11-22-2007, 01:12 AM
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Meri bad naseebi to ye hui, maiN khud aap apni misaal tha wahhh....Dr ji khoob likhtay ho aap bhi.....bohat acha laga parh kar khas tour par is .....line k liye dher sari dad aap ki nazr qabol kijiye ga... 
__________________  MaiN apni piyaas pr raazi rahoN gi, Miray Aanso miray ''DiL'' Ki kafaalat k liy kaafi rahiN gay...!  |
Meri jaaN ye mera kamaal tha 
