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Meri jaaN ye mera kamaal tha

This is a discussion on Meri jaaN ye mera kamaal tha within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by kanwal Hussain Meri bad naseebi to ye hui, maiN khud aap apni misaal tha wahhh....Dr ji khoob ...


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Old 11-22-2007, 06:31 PM
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Meri bad naseebi to ye hui, maiN khud aap apni misaal tha
wahhh....Dr ji khoob likhtay ho aap bhi.....bohat acha laga parh kar
khas tour par is .....line k liye dher sari dad aap ki nazr qabol kijiye ga...
Thanx Kanwal, bohot hosla milta hai is tarah, bohot bohot shukria
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Mohtaram Saraabs saheb,

Buhat hi khubsoorat aur mayari ghazal likhi hai meri buhat saari daad aap ki is kaawish ki nazar aur is shair kay liyay khusoosi daad.

Tere mausamoN ka har aik pal, meri yaad maiN tha saja hua
Mujhe is se koi gharaz na thi, wo firaaq tha ke wisaal tha


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Wah buhat khoobsorat ... likhtay rahiyay aur bhat khush rahiyay
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Buhat khub likha hay apnay...buhat c dad is khubsurat ghazal ke liye...
Khush rahiye aor likhte rahiye~*~
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Mohtaram Saraabs saheb,

Buhat hi khubsoorat aur mayari ghazal likhi hai meri buhat saari daad aap ki is kaawish ki nazar aur is shair kay liyay khusoosi daad.

Tere mausamoN ka har aik pal, meri yaad maiN tha saja hua
Mujhe is se koi gharaz na thi, wo firaaq tha ke wisaal tha

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Tujhe aik bhi na safayee di, meri jaaN ye mera kamaal tha
Tujhe dostoN pe yaqeen tha, mujhe dushmanoN ka khayal tha

BaNTeeN shehr maiN, jo ra'ayateN, to panaah DhoonD li dasht maiN
Wo kisi ka rehm-o-karam sahi, ye meri anaa ka sawaal tha

Wo jo lamha bhar ki bahaar thi, meri umr bhar ka hisaar thi
Na naye guloN ki talab koi, na khizaaN ka koi malaal tha

Tere mausamoN ka har aik pal, meri yaad maiN tha saja hua
Mujhe is se koi gharaz na thi, wo firaaq tha ke wisaal tha

Bhala waqt se maiN DarooNga kia, kabhi khauf iska karooNga kia
Jise haNs ke maiN ne chuna tha khud, wahi iska ghaiz-o-jalaal tha

Kisi aur ka bhi ye haal ho, to ye dil na itna niDhaal ho
Meri bad naseebi to ye hui, maiN khud aap apni misaal tha

Mujhe ilm tha, maiN Saraab tha, so naseeb mera kharaab tha
Wo jo raiza raiza hawa maiN tha, wahi mera khwab-o-khayal tha

As-salam-o-alaikum Saraabz bhai,

wahhh..... jnab khoob hi likhty haiN aap bhi.... is taweel behr ko bhi umdgi se nibhaya, aur maqta k to k to kya hi kehny... bohat aalaa... sabhi ashaar dil meiN uter rahy haiN.... so meri janib se her her shair pr dhairoN daad qubool kreN, Allah Mola aap ko is se bhi ziada ata kary...

bas 2nd shair k pehly misry k pehly his'sy meiN kuch gerber lagti hy, shyad typing meiN koi lafz miss ho gya hy.... aik bar dekh iljiay ga....

khush raheN aabad raheN aur hmeiN isi trha apny kalaam se mustafeed krty raheN....
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