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This is a discussion on Meri jaaN ye mera kamaal tha within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Originally Posted by kanwal Hussain Meri bad naseebi to ye hui, maiN khud aap apni misaal tha wahhh....Dr ji khoob ...
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| Thanx Kanwal, bohot hosla milta hai is tarah, bohot bohot shukria
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| Mohtaram Saraabs saheb, Buhat hi khubsoorat aur mayari ghazal likhi hai meri buhat saari daad aap ki is kaawish ki nazar aur is shair kay liyay khusoosi daad. Tere mausamoN ka har aik pal, meri yaad maiN tha saja hua Mujhe is se koi gharaz na thi, wo firaaq tha ke wisaal tha Anis Hasan |
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| Wah buhat khoobsorat ... likhtay rahiyay aur bhat khush rahiyay ShAnI ![]()
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| Buhat khub likha hay apnay...buhat c dad is khubsurat ghazal ke liye... Khush rahiye aor likhte rahiye~*~ |
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| Thank you so much for your appreciation and Jazak-Allah for your signature |
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| Ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka bohot bohot shukria...kai dinon se aap ki koi nai kaawish nahin dekhi....khairiat to hai |
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As-salam-o-alaikum Saraabz bhai, wahhh..... jnab khoob hi likhty haiN aap bhi.... is taweel behr ko bhi umdgi se nibhaya, aur maqta k to k to kya hi kehny... bohat aalaa... sabhi ashaar dil meiN uter rahy haiN.... so meri janib se her her shair pr dhairoN daad qubool kreN, Allah Mola aap ko is se bhi ziada ata kary... bas 2nd shair k pehly misry k pehly his'sy meiN kuch gerber lagti hy, shyad typing meiN koi lafz miss ho gya hy.... aik bar dekh iljiay ga.... khush raheN aabad raheN aur hmeiN isi trha apny kalaam se mustafeed krty raheN....
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