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MERI CHOORIYON KI KHANAK VOHI................

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Old 02-15-2005, 06:48 PM
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meri jaan hai voh meri zindgi meri rooh ka voh qaraar hai
meri doobti kashti ka voh nakhuda bhi hai patwaar hai

meri chooriyon ki khanak vohi paazaib ki jhankar hai
meri ankh ka voh saroor hai vohi dil bhi hai dildar hai

vohi jaan gudaaz dil mein mere voh khayal e jheel mai maujzan
vohi hai nazar ki shuaa meri vohi pyar hai iqraar hai

jiska dilko tha mere intezar jo ke dil mein tha mere ashkbar
vohi ab sakoon 0 qaraar hai vohi yaar hai voh singhar hai

jisko dete thay bas sadayen hum jisse dhoondhte thay gali gali
vohi leke pyar hai aagaya vohi soz e dil ki pukar hai

jisse paa ke humne tha kho diya jiske gham mein thay hum bujhey bujhey
vohi jaan e jaan vohi aashna vohi ab sakoon e bahaar hai

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Old 02-15-2005, 07:27 PM
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hello....[/b]ur poetry is marvellous
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very nice /rose


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thanks nabiha saif,
thanks alltreasure @};- @};- @};-
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jisse paa ke humne tha kho diya jiske gham mein thay hum bujhey bujhey
vohi jaan e jaan vohi aashna vohi ab sakoon e bahaar hai

good 1

infact da whole ghazal is superb
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Ziha
meri jaan hai voh meri zindgi meri rooh ka voh qaraar hai
meri doobti kashti ka voh nakhuda bhi hai patwaar hai

meri chooriyon ki khanak vohi paazaib ki jhankar hai
meri ankh ka voh saroor hai vohi dil bhi hai dildar hai

vohi jaan gudaaz dil mein mere voh khayal e jheel mai maujzan
vohi hai nazar ki shuaa meri vohi pyar hai iqraar hai

jiska dilko tha mere intezar jo ke dil mein tha mere ashkbar
vohi ab sakoon 0 qaraar hai vohi yaar hai voh singhar hai

jisko ko dete thay bas sadayen hum jisse dhoondhte thay gali gali
vohi leke pyar hai aagaya vohi soz e dil ki pukar hai

jisse paa ke humne tha kho diya jiske gham mein thay hum bujhey bujhey
vohi jaan e jaan vohi aashna vohi ab sakoon e bahaar hai

@};- @};- @};-
/clap5 /oopz /zpghh
wah wah wahhh...@};- Ziha ji....aap ki soch aur jazbaat mein din ba din jo nikhar aa raha hai... wo daad ka mustahiq hai.... aap ki ye ghazal aap ki umdah salahiyaton ka moo'n bolta saboot hai.... mashallah bohat hi khoob...bohat khushi huyee parh ker... (y)

wafa aur dua ke saath
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thanks a lot Shumaela Rana, and withlove
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Buhat khoob Ziha g.. /weldone

shair kay end main hai ki jaga agar bhi use karain tu har shair ka wazan bhatar hoo jaiey ga..jaysay

meri jaan hai voh meri zindgi meri rooh ka voh qaraar bhi
meri doobti kashti ka voh nakhuda bhi hai patwaar bhi

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hmm very nice.....buhat achha likha hai aap ne
alwayz b happy take care@};-
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