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RulesThis is a discussion on Meri Behna..... Aik nazm within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; salam jab rishtay takhleeq patay hain to un k sath wabasta jazbat ko bayan kerna bari had tak namumkin hota ...
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08-01-2004, 03:54 PM
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salam jab rishtay takhleeq patay hain to un k sath wabasta jazbat ko bayan kerna bari had tak namumkin hota hay ...wesay bhi aj kal tabiyat likhnay per zara bhi maail nahi hay ....aik nazm likhi hay ab kesi hay ye to app loog bahter bata saktay hain ...duaoon main yaad rakhiyayga ...or bahna ap k liyey ye k mujhay duaoon main nahi bhoolna tahir  kabhi main nay na soocha tha key itna piyar meri zindagi main rang bhar dayga mujhay thi kab khaber tum meri duniya main youn aoogi mujhay is khoobsorat pak rshtay say milaoogi yaqeee.N kab tha kay is jug main jahan her soo diloo.N main nafratoo.N key bar ley ker jhoot chahray muskuratay hain andheeroo.N ko barhatay hain wahan tum is muqadas piyar key rishtay ki shama ko jalaoogi mujhay sach say milaoogi Meri bahna Khuda tum ko wo tabeerai.N ata kerday key jin k khuwab tum chupkay say tanhai main bunti hoo ye duniya khoobsorat pak jazboon say usi tarah say saj jayee key jesay sochti hoo tum teri duniya main meri jaa.N kabhi ik pul ko na aye koi ahsaas khoonay ka kisi shay k na hoonay ka Meri bahna tera her roop sukh ka hoo sakoo.N hoo zindagi teri kahii.N ik pul na dukh ka hoo Meri bahna kabhi soocha na tha main is tarah ki nazm likhoonga kathin hay marhala jazbooo.N ko lafzoo.N main samoonay ka mujhay ahsaas hay apnay qalam ki baybasi ka per.....meray tootay say lafzoo.N ko zara lub say ada kerdoo inhai.N choo ker meri bahna zara jeewan ata kerdoo
__________________ Taira Khayal Raat Bari Der Tak Raha Main Sahib E Kamal Bari Der Tak Raha Last edited by tahirraza; 09-03-2004 at 02:00 PM.                  |
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08-01-2004, 04:17 PM
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Very nice.
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#3
08-01-2004, 06:36 PM
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buhat khoob @};- khush raho hamesha @};-
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08-01-2004, 11:27 PM
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sahi .. bouhat sey jazbey lafzoun kay mohtaaj nahin hotey ... magar hamein unhein kabhi kabhi lafz dainey partay hein ... achi nazm hai ... jeetay rahiyey 1.gif ")1")
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08-01-2004, 11:32 PM
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As nain said above bouhat sey jazbey lafzoun kay mohtaaj nahin hotey @};- Jazbay lafzoon kay mohtaaj nahi howa kartay.. haan magar jazboon ko kisi bhi dhab say likhain un ka husan khud bool parta hai.. Khoobsourat nazam @};- Khush Rahiyeah
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08-01-2004, 11:44 PM
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[quote=tahirraza] bohot khub Tahair Sahab ... agar app ki eejazaat ho tu main ye ap ki poem kisi kay naam ker saktahon .. jin jazbon ka duwaon ka izhaar app nay kia yahan waysay he kuch meray bhee hain meri ek bohot piyari si behen kay liye .. app ki eejazaat ka muntazir Zia |
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08-02-2004, 09:11 AM
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nice...
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08-02-2004, 09:26 AM
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bohat khoob.../rose
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08-03-2004, 11:19 AM
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very nice
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