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Meri Aik Ghazal

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Old 01-12-2008, 09:00 PM
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Assalam-o-alaikum,

HG poets club kay tamam saathion ki khidmat mein apni aik ghazal pesh kar raha houn parh kar apni qeemti aara say zaroor nawaziyay ga.

Youn bheer tou itni Hi keh rasta nahin milta
Aur dhoondhain tou phir bhi koyee apna nahin milta

Din raat ki ik daur hai yeh zindagi kiya hai
Hum khud say milain jis mein who lamha nahin milta

Kiya dhoop say narmi ki umeed ab koyee rakhain
Jab apni hi chut say hamain saaya nahin milta

Main bikhri hui zaat ko kis tarah say joroun
Jo sub say zaroori hai who tukra nahin milta

Yeh dil mera shayad keh kisi bun ka makee’n hai
Is ka tow kisi say bhi tareeqa nahin milta

Ujri hui mehmil mein koyee aks nahin hai
Aur khaak uranay ko bhi sehra nahin milta

Yeh dard ki daulat jo anis hum ko mili hai
Har aik ko yeh bhi tow khazana nahin milta

Anis Hasan

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Old 01-12-2008, 11:10 PM
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walikum asalam..

bohat hi khubsooorat ghazal kahi Anis bhai... kia bat hai.. bohat hi dilkash..

Main bikhri hui zaat ko kis tarah say joroun
Jo sub say zaroori hai who tukra nahin milta

wahhhhhhh... jo sab say zaroori hai.. kia kehnay haiN.. mashAllah..

bohat khush rahiye
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Old 01-12-2008, 11:22 PM
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wah!!!
bahot khoob janaab Anis Hasan saaheb,be had khoobsurat ghazal rahi yeh bhi,so bahot si daad qabool kijiye,
mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,aor ham se share kartey rahiye,
bahot khush rahiye,
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Anees bhai salaam

meri jaanib say is khubsuret ghazal per daad qabul kijiay

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very nice.............
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Main bikhri hui zaat ko kis tarah say joroun
Jo sub say zaroori hai who tukra nahin milta

wah Anis saheb. Sari ghazal hi bey had murassa hey. Dheron daad.

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Kiya dhoop say narmi ki umeed ab koyee rakhain
Jab apni hi chut say hamain saaya nahin milta

Main bikhri hui zaat ko kis tarah say joroun
Jo sub say zaroori hai who tukra nahin milta

Wah wah Anis Bhai......hamesha ki tarah shandar aur bakamaal ghazal kahi hai....bohot bohot ziada daad is nihaet shandar ghazal ki nazr hai........
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Main bikhri hui zaat ko kis tarah say joroun
Jo sub say zaroori hai who tukra nahin milta..
wahh.........bohat khoob
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Main bikhri hui zaat ko kis tarah say joroun
Jo sub say zaroori hai who tukra nahin milta


Wah......Boht Khooob..... Very Nice Thinking......

Sada Khush Rahain...
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