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Meri Aik Ghazal

This is a discussion on Meri Aik Ghazal within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; POri ghazal behad khubsurat hay..meri taraf se buhat c dad qabool kigiye..ye shair sab se zyada pasand aya tumharay baad ...


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Old 10-28-2007, 10:39 PM
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POri ghazal behad khubsurat hay..meri taraf se buhat c dad qabool kigiye..ye shair sab se zyada pasand aya
tumharay baad bhataknay kay raastay hain buhat
magar naheen hai yeh hum say wafa shuar ki raah
...ise tarah likhte rahiye aor hum sab se share kartay rahiye...khush rahain shad'O'abad rahain!
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walaikum Asslam Anis bhai aap ki kai kavishein meri nazar
se guzrin aur seedhi dil main
utar gai hain aur mujhe yeh kehne main koi aar nahin k aap pc k aik
manjhay hoey
shaair hain aap k lafz yeh gawahi detey hain k aap aik pukhta soch k haamil
shair hain poori ghazal superb hai
lekin yeh sher to bohut hi ziyda lutuf de gaya
woh ratjagay houn, Ibadat ho, duniyadaari ho
kisi tarah say tu niklay kaoyee qarar ki raah
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Old 10-29-2007, 01:42 PM
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Bohat umdaah Ghazal kahi hai aap ne Anis bhaee


dil khush ho gaya hai perh ker


khush rehiya
Mohtaram Aatif saheb,

Ghazal ki is pazeerai ka behud shukriya.

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excellent........... ............
Mohtarma Yasmin saheba,
Buhat shukriya.

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tumharay baad bhataknay kay raastay hain buhat
magar naheen hai yeh hum say wafa shuar ki raah...
wah...aik aik shair itna acha laga k kia kahon....bas yahi
kahon gi k bohat sara likhtay rahin aur hm parhtay rahin..mazid ka intazaar rahay ga.....khush rahin aabad rahin...
Mohtarma Kanwal saheba,

Aap ki is purkhuloos daad-o-tehseen ka buhat shukriya.

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POri ghazal behad khubsurat hay..meri taraf se buhat c dad qabool kigiye..ye shair sab se zyada pasand aya
tumharay baad bhataknay kay raastay hain buhat
magar naheen hai yeh hum say wafa shuar ki raah
...ise tarah likhte rahiye aor hum sab se share kartay rahiye...khush rahain shad'O'abad rahain!
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Mohtarma Zeneya saheba,

Aap ko meri ghazal pasnad aayee buhat mamnoon houn.

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walaikum Asslam Anis bhai aap ki kai kavishein meri nazar
se guzrin aur seedhi dil main
utar gai hain aur mujhe yeh kehne main koi aar nahin k aap pc k aik
manjhay hoey
shaair hain aap k lafz yeh gawahi detey hain k aap aik pukhta soch k haamil
shair hain poori ghazal superb hai
lekin yeh sher to bohut hi ziyda lutuf de gaya
woh ratjagay houn, Ibadat ho, duniyadaari ho
kisi tarah say tu niklay kaoyee qarar ki raah
Rida behan,

Aap ki tareef aur tehseen ka buhat shukriya umeed hai keh aap aainda bhi meri kavishon ko isi tawajah say parh kar apni purkhuloos rayay daiti rahain gi.

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ab ashk aankhon say be-ikhtiar behtay hain
chalaya hum nay buhat khud ko ikhtiar ki raah

wahhh sahib waahhh, kya gahzal takhleeq ki hy apne. aur ye sheyr to jitni tareef ki jayee kam ho gi. wah wah wah. mujh haqeer ki taraf se bhi daad ka nazrana pesh hy, likhty rahen. sahad-o-abad raheen.

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Assalam-o-alaikum,
Apni aik aur ghazal aap tamam doston ki khidmat mein pesh kar raha houn aapki qeemti aa'ra aur tabsiron ka intezar rahay ga.

Kisi gurez kay rastay koyee farar ki raah
chalain ab hum bhi kisi ajnabi dayar ki raah

woh ratjagay houn, Ibadat ho, duniyadaari ho
kisi tarah say tu niklay kaoyee qarar ki raah

ab ashk aankhon say be-ikhtiar behtay hain
chalaya hum nay buhat khud ko ikhtiar ki raah

tumharay baad bhataknay kay raastay hain buhat
magar naheen hai yeh hum say wafa shuar ki raah

fana kay baad tu aakhir milain gay phir tum say
isi umeed pay chaltay hain intezar ki raah

taweel daasta'n sunnay ka ab hai waqt kisay
Anis hum nay bhi dhoondi hai ikhtesar ki raah

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wah anis bhai kya khoob ghazal kahi hy ap ne, tamaam ki tamaam ghazal hi umda hy, so meri janib se her shair pr dheroN daad, qubool kren, khush rahen aabad rahen, aur younhi achaa acha likhty aur ham se share krty rahen...
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