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This is a discussion on Merey Hamdam Merey Dost..... nazm within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Aik Purani Nazm, naye doston k nam....
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| Aik Purani Nazm, naye doston k nam.
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#2
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| very nice poem Inam bhai /good1 thanks for sharing @};-
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#4
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| wahh..bouhat khoob
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#5
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| wah wah bohat aala khush rahee likhte rahee
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| bahut khoobsoorat likha hey app nay bahut hiiii acha laga perh ker likhtay rahiyee
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#8
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| Bohat shukreya Mahe, Neintara, Shugufta, Aarzu, aor Ather bhae bari nawazish, Bewafa, aap aapna naam to likheye, aap 'bewafa' lagtey nahein, aap ki shairi mein to charchey Wafa k hotey hein, aor nam bewafa rakha hey aap ney, ya pir aap ye zahir kerna chahatey hein k 'Wafa Ki Khyr Manata Hon Bewafae Mein Bhe'. Aagarchey aap ye keh ker baat badal saktey hein k 'Kam jo hey aacha hey - Nam mein keya rakha hey', magar baat pir wahen reh jaye gi ..... leykin choreye aakhir kon si baat puri hoe hey 'Haye Wo baat k Isbat na honey Paye'. Dosto, Is be magz guftagu k leye mahzarat chahata hon, bas Baat ker ney ko ji chata tha, Baqol Faiz 'Aaj Ik Harf Ko Dundta Pirta Hey Kheyal Mad bhara harf koe, Zehr Bhara harf Koe Dil nashein harf koe, qehr bhara harf koe harf-e-ulfat, koe dildar nazar ho jesey Jis sey milti hey nazar Bosa-e-lab ki surat Sahat-e-wasl mein aagaz-e-tarab ki surat harf-e-nafrat koe shamsheer-e-gazab ho jesey Ta abad Sher-e-sitam jis sey tabah ho jein Itna Tareek k shamshaan ki shab jo jesey lab pey layon, to merey hont seya ho yein' lejeye baat kahan sey kahan nikal gaye... aab bas kerta hon. mahzara k sath aadab Inam |
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| bauhat acchi nazam hai, magar it is strikingly similar to the nazam composed by Faiz with the same title. Aur Faiz ke samnay kiss ka chiragh jalta hai bhai. |