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Old 01-23-2004, 12:52 PM
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AOA Danmurfi Sahab, kal bhi main nay tamam ahbaab k jawabaat deye they magar wo ur hi gay

sab sey pehly tu app ka bohat shukriya k app ko meri kokshish passand aai,
dosra shukriya is liye k app nay sahi kaha k asal lafz "chab" hota hay na k "jhab" magar kya kkejeye jaane unjaane main apni kum ilmi k bais main jhab likh gai, jis k liye mazrat khwa hoon aur app ki shukar guzaar bhi k app nay islah ki

dosri baat " kkarey hoon" mutaliq hay tu yahan bhi app ka kahna baja hay k karey hoon ka istamaal yahan mumkin na tha, is ghazal ki islah shuda shakal main sab k jawabat k baad post karti hon, ustaad e mohtaram Sarwar Alam Raz Sarwar Sahab nay karey hoon ko "karoon hoon" sey badal diya hay, app nay is janib bhi taqaju dilaai bohat meherbaani

aik baar main phir tah-e dill sey app ki shukar guzaar hon k app nay is darja taqaju sey meri ghazal parhi, aaenda bhi isi kisam kk reply ki mutaman'ni hoon

khush raheye hamesha

/aoa

aji hamara itna ilm kahan ke kisi ki islaah kar sakein, bas kuchh cheezein nayi nazar aayein to poochh liya. Mubarak ho aap ko bhi ke islaah ke liye aik itni muhtaram hasti mili aur un ki bhi khush qismati ki honehaar shagird(a)milien.

Islaah shuda nazm bhi parhi, beshak mazeed nikhar gayi hai.
Allah karey zor-e-qlam aur zyada

Allah hafiz
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Assalam-o-Allikum shugufta je

wah! wah! buhtu Khoob!
kia sugufta Ghazal kahi hay aap nay

matla' to kamal hay! weldone!!

KHuda karay zoor-e-qalam aur zyada!

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AOA Nabeel sahab, bohat shukriya passandeedgi ka

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bohot khubsorat shagufta dear

shukriya Sarosh

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/aoa

aji hamara itna ilm kahan ke kisi ki islaah kar sakein, bas kuchh cheezein nayi nazar aayein to poochh liya. Mubarak ho aap ko bhi ke islaah ke liye aik itni muhtaram hasti mili aur un ki bhi khush qismati ki honehaar shagird(a)milien.

Islaah shuda nazm bhi parhi, beshak mazeed nikhar gayi hai.
Allah karey zor-e-qlam aur zyada

Allah hafiz
W/salam Danmurfi, aji aab itni bhi kasr-e nafsi na dikhaeye, app ki shairana kabiliyat ki tu main bhi motarif hon.
islah shuda kalaam passand karne ka shukriya, aur main beshak apni kismat pe nazaa.n hon k Sarwar sahab nay islah ki, jahan tak shagird ka talouq hay wo mujhe kya kisi ko bhi baqaida shagird nahi banate. magar hum unhain apna ustaad mante hain.

khush raheye hamesha
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buhat hi khobsorat likha hay
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AOA DIya, bohattttttt shukriya sis

mujhe bohat khushi hoi k tumhain meri ghazal passand aai

aur jahan takk baat hay mayoosi ki tu aisi bhi koi baat nahi hay bass wo kya kahtey hain k

Hansi k rang tu kai meharbaan they lekin
Udasiyoo.n sey hi nibhti khameer aisa tha

aik baar phir shukriya
khush raho hamesha

/yhug aapi dekhain agar aap nai mujhe behan mana hai to no thanku and sorry aur dosri baat ye kai

jab kabhi hansi par udasi ki dhund chanai lagai
tum koi khusgawaar lamha
yadoon sai chura laina

aapi udasi ko door karna bhi hamarai bas mein hai na

khush raha karain /yhug
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