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06-12-2008, 12:02 PM
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lagta hai bhia aapko meri bat phir samaj mein nehin hai i aap baatien to kar lagte hoo per sochte nehin hoo ke kya bat likh reha hoon agar aapko pasand nehin hai ke mein yehe per ghazal send karo to sehi hia mein nehin karta aur rehi bat .. ke aap na kaha hia mein aap logoon ko fool bena raha hon to mein kyun aapko banoo gya kon see aap na mujhe koe gift dena hai sehi hia na meri likhi hoe apni gazal aur namz hotien hain aur yeh baat mujhe nehin pata wo kise kise aur ki shariye ke sath jay millti hain per shyad us na jo socha hoo mera dimag na be woh socha hoo to please dont hurt me hope next time u remember ... take care Allah hafiz
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08-30-2008, 10:12 AM
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Arey Faizan bhae, ye kambakht aik bar pehley bhi ban ho chuka hai, designed poetry section mein dosrey shaeron ki shairi SHAER: ALI ki naam se post karta tha, main bahot toka aur kafi panga lia, kuch doston ne mana bhi kia keh kiun tang kartey ho, mujhey yaqeen tha keh ye shairi us ki apni nahi hai, per aap ki tara proof nahi tha merey paas, laikin is ki apni likhi shairi ka main ne matlab poocha , jis ka ye sahi jawab nahi de saka aur ulti seedhi batien karne laga. akser awqat alfaz badalne ke chaker mein maani kuch se kuch ho jatey they. aakhir kaar ban hi ho gaya. ab us ki replies daikh kar yaqeen ho gaya keh ye wahi ALI hai, kiunke ye roman urdu tab bhi aisey hi ghalat likhta tha aur aaj bhi usi tara ghalat likhta hai, NAZAM ko NAMAZ likhne wala SHAER . |
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