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acha jee sehi hia ... per aap ko bata chalo yeh meri apni nazam hain thek hai na aur aap nay yeh bat kise ki hai ke yeh mri nehin hai chalo aab yeh kise aur ki sabad karo do to mein jo kaho gay woh karoun gay aur na hoe to soch lo ... thek hai na bat karni to ati hia per soch samaj kar liye karo sehi hia na ....... Allah aapko khush rakh aur nothing ....
be free happy .................

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As-salam-o-alaikum Shahid Ali Kiyani Sahab....

aap ki nazm paRhi, designing bohat achi ki hy aap ne mager nazm paRh kr bohat hayrat hui k ye nazm mojuda daur k sahib-e-kitab aur hamari nasl k leading shairoN meiN se aik shair Manaan Qadeer Manaan ki kitab "Mujhy Tum se Mahabat hy" meiN darj aik nazm "udaasi tark kar do ab" se hairat-angez had tak mumasilat rakhti hy.... balky akser jaghoN pr to sary ka sara misra hi aik dusry se milta hy. kuch batana pasand kreN gy k ye nazm aap ne kab likhi???

mazeed wazahat k liay maiN aap ki design ki gai nazm aur un ki kitab meiN darj nazm yahaN roman meiN likh deta huN...

donoN nazmeN kuch youN haiN:

Pehly aap ki design krda nazm:

youNhi bekar mat beTho meri jan,
mery hijr meiN janan,
na khud ko itna taRpao,
udasi aik shola hy,
gharoN ko jo jalata hy,
ye dil bhi ik gharonda hy,
jo jal ja'ay to baqi kuch nahiN rehta,
meri mano meri jan,
mery wo sary khat jo main ne tumhary nam likhy thy,
jala daalo meri jan,
maiN ne tum ko bhula dala,
meri jan tum bhi mujh ko bhula dalo,

ab Manan Qadeer Manan Sahab ki nazm:

udaasi tark kar do ab,
yoonHi be kaar mat betho
kissi ke hijr maiN jaanaaN,
na khud ko itnaa taRpaao
udaasi aek sho.laa hai,
gharoN ko jo jalaataa hai,
agar jal jaaye
to baaqi naheeN rehtaa hai phir kuchh bhi,
mree maano
woh saarey khat jo us ne tum ko likhey the,
jalaa Daalo
tum aiN jis ne bhulaa Daalaa,
ussey tum bhi bhulaa Daalo

mazeed arz krta chaluN k Manaan Qadeer Manaan sahab ki is kitab ka pehla Edition year 2001 meiN market meiN aaya, aur us k baad 2004 tak is kitab k 10 Edition aa chuky haiN...

aap se derkhawst hy k is surat-e-haal pr kuch roshni DaleN aur bata'aiN k kya unhoN ne aap ki nazm ko toR maRoR kr apni nazm likhi ya ap se ye ghalati ser-zed hui???

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maiN yahaN Manaan Qadeer Manaan Sahab ki kitaab ka sar-e-warq aur in ki nazm wala safha yahaN share kr raha huN, takay members ko situation ziada wazeh ho saky:

Waly kum sallam
jee aap na sehi kaha hia .. per mein koe ghzal yeh aashaar nehin likhta na hi koe namaz bas woe likhta hon jo mera sath hoa hia jo uski yaadien thi aur kuch mera dukh thay wo sab likh deltay hon
per yeh bat sehi ki hai humheri ghazal yeh aashar yeh namaz kise aur ke ghazal ke sath millti juttli hai per phir be insan ko soch samaj kar bat karni chiye ke bin parah hi yeh bolne ke yeh aapki nehin hai kisi aur ki hai to insan ko kitna dukh lagta hai yeh to aapko be bat pata hogee .. any way mein insallah ab apni koe na koe book hi likhoo gay kyun ke yehe per shyad mere dukh yeh dard ko koe nehin samaj saktay
Khush rahien aapsab
Allah hafiz
Shahid Ali Kiyani....

Mujhe tumsee mohabbat hai
per bhai jee ek bat kaho mind nehin karne
yehe per koe kise ke sath mohabbat nehin karta hai
sab kuch jhout hai
bas yeh humheri soch tak hota hia ke shyad humsee koe mohabbat karta hai
per aj ki duniye mein koe kise ke sath pyar nehin karta
aur wo mohabbat hi kia jise mein insan aik teraaf mohabbat kar
humheri soch tak hi sab kuch rahe to achi bat hai
ab kebhi kebhi ghazal yeh aashar yeh namaz mein wo bat kar jaty hain shyad kise aur ko wo bat humheri samaj mein nehin hai ati
per us insan ko zur ati hai jo ke dosaroon ke dukh yeh dard ko samjte hooo
Allah hafiz
SHAHID ALI KIYANI

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