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~*~ mere sahil sai keh daina bina us kai adhoori hoon ~*~

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Old 10-01-2005, 01:53 PM
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bahot khoob diya,bahot achha likha aap ne,
bahot khush rahiye,aor likhti rahiye.

tareef ka behadh shukriya zain @};-

insha Allah share karti rahoongi khush rahiyai
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BUhat khoobsurat @};-



khoob likha hai


khush raho

khushi hui tumhien nazam pasand ai chanda

bauhat khush raho tum
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lajawabkhush raho sadda

khushi hui tumhein nazam pasand ai

tum bhi khush raho
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salaam dostoo @};-

aik aur nazam aap sab kai sath share karnai ja rahi hoon umeed hai pasand ai gi @};-

~*~ mere sahil sai keh daina bina us kai adhori hoon ~*~

Mere sahil sai keh daina
Bina us kai adhoori hoon
Kinarai par khari tanha
Usi ki rah takti hoon
Hai sang us kai kaye maujain
Jo apna aap lutati hain
Mujhe acha nahi lagta
Woh sahil sirf mera hai
Mein sirf us ki hoon
Suno us sai ye keh daina
Mujhe acha ye lagta hai
woh mere sang rahai yunhi
Us ki sochoon mein ho guzar
To sirf meri yaad ka
Us ki batoon mein ho zikar
To sirf meri zaat ka
Mere sahil sai keh daina
Kabhi jab chandni ho sang
Mujhe woh yaad ata hai

Kabhi jo shaam dhalti hai
Khayal us ka hi ata hai
Meri sochoon mein shamil hai
Ban kar who rang ulfat ka
Mere sahil sai keh daina
Mera dil yehi chahta hai
Woh umar bhar sang chalai mere
Mere khawaboon ka basera ho
Woh daman mein bharai khushyaan
Meri zindagi ka sawera ho
Yaan chahai gham ki hi dhund
Cha jai dil ki wadi par
Karoongi raushan wafaoon sai
Andheri sab rahoon ko
Mere sahil sai keh daina
Hai tamanna bas yehi meri
Mein bikhroon jo kabhi to woh
Mujhe samaitai mohabbat sai
Mere askhoon mein dekhai woh
Usi ka naam raushan hai
Mere sahil sai keh daina
Us kai kinarai ki mujhe woh
Mauj banna hai
Jo bikrai to har lamha
Magar rahai panahoon mein
Usi ki mohabbat ki rahoon mein
Nahi panai ki khawaish par
Mujhe us kai sang jeena hai
Mere sahil sai keh daina
Suno us sai ye keh daina
Bina us k adhoori hoon.....

khush rahiyai sab @};-

Salaam

Waise Diya aapii aaj to achchhii tarah pata lag gaya k aap bhii chhupii Sha'ira haiN ... Bohot hii khoob likhtii haiN ... Allah aapko hameSha shaad o aabaad rakhay ... Ameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee en!

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:
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w.salam & salam
wow sonya b kamaaaaaal karti hain Aap itna acha kasaaaaaaaaaaa likha
bohat acha likha Aap ne yunhi acha acha likh ker share karti rahye or bohat khush rahye
no doubt bohat acha likha
no improvement warna ghalti zaror batata . shabash bachi.

salam

aik to furki tum na aik hi sans mein bol jatai ho sab kuch....khushi hui tumhein nazam pasand ai aur shukar hai koi ghalti nahi hui mujhse

bauhat khush raho tum @};-
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bhut zabardast ijazat ho to kuch yun kahon

tairay sahil ki majboori
tairi khamoosh mojain hain
khud ban kai abb toofan
milja apnay sahil sai too...

umeed hai bura nahin lagay ga

tareef ka shukriya @};-

wah ji kya khoob jawab diya hai aap nai chalain ye bhi azma kar dekhain gai

khush rahiyai @};-
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wahhhhh aapi..bohat khooob...

waisay fikar not..apke sahil say main keh doongi.......au r bhi koi msg hai to bata dain

waisay kush din wait kar lain...aap khud apne sahil ke pas hongi :haha

khush rahiye

wsalaam aur salaam bacha

khushi hui tumhein nazam pasand ai oyeeeeeeee araam sai betho mein khud keh doongi sahil sai tum bhi na bas

hai Allah sharam nahi ati behan ko tang kartai :blushy1

khush raho
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