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RulesThis is a discussion on ~*~ mere sahil sai keh daina bina us kai adhoori hoon ~*~ within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; W/salam Buhat khob diya g ,, buhat acha laga pehar kar yonhi likhti rahooo 3 buhat khush rahoo...
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#11
09-30-2005, 06:26 PM
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W/salam Buhat khob diya g ,, buhat acha laga pehar kar yonhi likhti rahooo  3 buhat khush rahoo 1.gif ")1")
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#12
09-30-2005, 06:29 PM
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very nice.bohat hi achi poem hai. |
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09-30-2005, 09:34 PM
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bohat khoobsurat nazm likhi hai ye parh k Kanwal ki aik nazm yaad aa gai khayyal acha hai alfaaz bhi achey hain bas kaheen kaheen mujhe laga k nazm ki rawani main kuch kami si reh gai ho jaise.... ho sakta hai meri khaam khayali ho per majmoi tor pe bohat achi nazm likhne pe bohat daad qobool kejeye bohat khush raheye hamesha
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#14
10-01-2005, 01:44 AM
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Bohat khoob... Bohat hi umdaah... taveel likhna aur eik hi baat ka saath rakhna.. rabbt ka khayal aur jazbo'n ka ehsaas rakhna... kafi mushkil fun hai .. magar aap ke liye zayada mushkil nahi .. aap ke ye takhleeq iss amar ka saboot hai .. Bohat Shukria.. @};- wafa aur dua ke saath withlove @};-
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#15
10-01-2005, 01:59 AM
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Asslam-o-Alikum wr wb sabsey phly to bhot pyari hy , secondly aikprob hy ! wo ya ky sahil ji to sirf abhi 24 sal ky hy  un ko maloom hua to samnder ain hi dubra chalng laga dy gi lolzz FeaamnAllah |
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#16
10-01-2005, 02:43 AM
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bohat khoob diya ji .. @};- |
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#17
10-01-2005, 04:56 AM
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Very Nice Diya ... Allah Aap ko sukhi rakhay .. Ameen
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#18
10-01-2005, 05:17 AM
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ahaa... bohot achi... aaj yaahan ka chakkar laga to tumhari yeh naii nazm nazron se guzrii...khoob likhii.....waise aub taweel nazmain likhnay lagi ho... achi hai....magar bas kaheen kaheen se flow thora toot raha hai nazm main... usay dekhna... aur bohot zada khobsoorat lagaygii...  khush rahoo aur likhti rahoo..:hugz
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