Urdu Poetry Forum

<font color='#000000'>Mere dil ki rakh kuraid mat, isay muskura kay hawa na day

Yeh charagh phir bhi charagh hain, kahin taira hath jala na day

Yeh udasian na saja sakon , kabhi jism-o-jan kay mizar par

Na diay jalain meri ankh main mujhay itni sakht saza na day

Naiy dor kay naiy khawab hain , naiy mosmon kay gulab hain

Yeh mohabaton kay charagh hain,inhain nafraton ki hawa na day

Zara daikh chand ki pation nay bikhar bikhar kay tamam shab

Taira nam likha hay rait par koi lehr aa kar mita na day
(B.B)</font>



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<font color='#348781'>khoo bsurat &nbsp;<!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo--> &nbsp;<!--emo&/sweet--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/hb.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/sweet'><!--endemo--></font>

<font color='#8D38C9'>boho t khubsoorat zindage4u accha likha hey

pehlay shair kay doosray misray main kuch thishnagi hey halankay iska ehsaas bohot accha hey aur khubsoorat taasur paish ker raha hay
Yeh charagh phir bhi charagh hain, kahin taira hath jala na day

Isko agar Yeh charagh phir bhi charagh hay kar do ziyada behter lagay gaa

Zara daikh chand ki pation nay bikhar bikhar kay tamam shab

Taira nam likha hay rait par koi lehr aa kar mita na day

is main chand ki pation wali baat zara different lag rahi hey zara mukhtalif istaarah hey yeah

Over all bohot accha likha hey Allah karay zor-e-qalm aur ziyada
and keep shairing with us

Khush Rahain
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<font color='#000000'>than xxxxxxxxxxx kay ap ko pasand aye</font>

<font color='#0000cc'>Nice &nbsp;<!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo--></font>

<font color='#810541'>buha t acha likha hai aap ney ,.</font>

<font color='#000080'>Bouh t Khoob........</font>

<font color='#8D38C9'>very nice jee ... <!--emo&/weldone--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/div211.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='/weldone'><!--endemo-->

thx for sharin <!--emo&--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/wbyim01.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=''><!--endemo--></font>

<font color='#810541'>wah really bohut acha likha ... overall weldone but i like these two most
Mere dil ki rakh kuraid mat, isay muskura kay hawa na day

Yeh charagh phir bhi charagh hain, kahin taira hath jala na day &nbsp;<!--emo&(cool)--><img src="http://www.halagulla.com/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/cool.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt='(cool)'><!--endemo--></font>

<font color='#000000'>more comin soon.....
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take care</font>