Urdu Poetry Forum

Sagar kahata hei meray sang chalo
Ke door us parr ik dase hai
Jahan hawain piyar ki chalti hein
Jahan sakonn ka souraj chamakta hei
Jahan badal khoushian barsatay hein
Jahan dukh per pahray bethay hein
Wahan parinday aazadi ke geet sunatay hein
Wahan raat siah nahi hoti
Wahan din be-chain nahi hotay
Wahan bastay hein khush bash chahray
Wahan dill ghamgeen nahi hotay
Be-mole nahi wahan rishtay natay
Heeray motti mein nahi tultay hein
Wahan sach ki dhun per insaaf raqs karta hei
Wahan surr cheray bethi hei hayya
Har koi sunta hei sarr dhunta hei
Sagar kahat hei ke meray sang chalo
Meri lahron se bhi khuch rang chuno
Ke door tumhai us achay dase mein jaan hei.
Ab koon samjhay is pagli ko
Matt aa sagar ki baton mein
Asa to koi dase nahi....

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Just walking in the rain......

amazing,,,,,,,wow,,, ,,,,,,,kia kahneyn kia baat hey3
mein ney kaha thaa kia
khush raheyey sadda aysa hii madhur piyara piyara likhtii raheyey3

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don't worry ap ne khuch nahi kaha tha, sagar khan ne nahi sagar ne kaha tha.any way thanks alot.

sorry gar burra laga to just jocking
khush raheyey

MashAllah.. iss baar to aur bhi umdaah likha.. Bohat si daad qabool kijiye... nazam aur bhi umdah ho sakti hai .. agar nazam ko 2 barabar hiso'n main taqseem kiya jaye.. aur doosray hissay main alfaaz aagay peechay ker dein... to dono hisso'n main rabtt eik sa ho jaye ga.. aur nikhar barh jaye ga.. aisa meri naqas raye main hai ... jo ke hatmi to hergiz nahi .. kisi sahib-e-ilm se rujoo kijiye ga... Bohat Shukria...@};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

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aray ap bhi na .ufffffffff mujhay kion bura lagay ga.abhi mein ne apna secret bhi bataya tha ap ko i don't have mind so how can i mind any thing?
any way wasay ab mujhay darr lagnay lag gia hai ke meri batain shaid gussay walin hain shakal to thi hi:cry6

thanks alot.ap hi thek ker dain meray ird gird poetry ke mamlay mein koi sahib-e-ilm nahi .thanks again.duaon mein yadd rakhiye ga.

heyyyyyyyyyyyn achaa mein samjha aap ney moun phula key ghussey mein aa key baat kii hey uffffff:angry6
leykin mera jumla hii ghalat thaatop0
rooeyey naheyn :cry6 mujhey uljhan hotii heytop0

hahahahahahahaha jumla is liaye gussay wala laag us mein emotion nahi thay warna apni taraf se mein ne mazak kia tha. wasay mein moun nahi phulati na hi routi hon just acting.bataya to tha .remeber.