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This is a discussion on mera hamdam within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Assalam-0-Alaikum Tabassum ji... @};- I think there is a huge mis-understanding here... Asal meIN hamaray forum per apni shayeri share ...


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Old 10-13-2006, 01:39 AM
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Assalam-0-Alaikum Tabassum ji... @};-

I think there is a huge mis-understanding here...

Asal meIN hamaray forum per apni shayeri share kernay k liye alag forum hay aur doosrouN ki shayer share kernay ki alag....

aap nay apni shayeri uss section meiN share ker di thi jis meiN doosray poets ki shayeri ko member choice ker k select kertay hein Mystique ji aik kohna mashaq shayera haien.. .wo aap k andaz se to bhanp gayeeN k aap ki apni hay. ... laikin jaisa k forum ka rule hay k baghair confirmation k kaam nahiN Kiya jaga.. to unhouN nay aap se confirm kernay k liye 4 poems k liye 4 dafa poocha.. takay aap ki poems ko uss jaga move k iya jasakay jahaN members ki apni poetry hoti hay.. aur takay aap ki poems ko due response mil sakay... warna jahaN aap nay anjanay meiN post kiya... wahaN loug yahi samajhtay k ye aap ki apni nahiN hay.. aur aap ki salahiyatouN k saath nainsafi ho jati...

dekhiye... ab jab kay ye Poets Club meiN move huwi hay to loug aap ki shayeri ko sarah rahay heiN ... warna pehlay choice ko sarah rahay thay... so mystique ji nay aap ki bhalayee k liye poocha aur aap k talkh comment k bawajood aap ki thread sahi jaga move ker k aap k liye buhat acha kiya.... aik baat bata dooN k mystique ji yahaN ki buhat senior aur manjhi huwi shayera haiN.. aap ko kabhi unki poetry parhnay ka ittifaq ho tou aap zaroor apna comment wapus laina chahiNgi

chaliye koi baat nahiN misunderstanding ho jati hay ... Buhat khush rahiye...

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mera hamdam hai phool juhi ka
usko koi nazar lagana na
usake jaisa nahi ji koi nahi
saare alam me vo hai tanha sa

dil ka sachcha nazar ka paak hai vo
haan zara sa tunak mijaz hai vo
ek shak usake dil pe taari hai
usako gusse ki bhi bimari hai

main jo hans dun to bas vo chidh jaae
koi dekhe mujhe to jal jaae
jaane kya kya na soche vo dil me
meri bas jaan hi hai mushkil me

meri ghalti faqat hai bas itani si
vo mujhe jaan se bhi pyara hai
vo jo chahe kare aur karta rahe
ek vahi hai jo bas hamara hai

mera hamdam hai phool juhi ka
usko koi nazar lagana na.............

bohat khoob jnaab...

bohat achi kawish hy...

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suno achcha nahi lagta
yahaan sab ham ko padhte hain
hamare dil me bas tum ho
sabhi ye baat karte hain
tasvvur ki hadon me ho
hamari justju tumho
tumhe dekha nahi kabse
suno sab log padhte hain
kabhi khwaabon me aaoge ?
karo vada magar chhup ke
yahaan ye sab nahi likhna
yahaan sab log padhte hain
tumhari chahaten lekar
jiye ab tak bas ye sach hai
tumhe likha hi hai bas sach
kabhi socha hai aur chaha
magar rishta hamara ye
yahaan likhne ka hi to nahi
yahaan sabko pata hoga
yahaan sab log padhte hain

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