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This is a discussion on mera hamdam within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; AOA.thnx a lot afsana asifa aur mistique............ .ji main khud hi likhti hun abhi apna likha hi post nahi kar ...
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#21
10-11-2006, 03:49 PM
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AOA.thnx a lot afsana asifa aur mistique............ .ji main khud hi likhti hun abhi apna likha hi post nahi kar pai hun dusron ka kab karungi .........aap ka saval achcha laga .ye bhi ek tareef hai . tah e dil se shukriya............ ....bahut likha hai maine post karungi jab bhi waqt mila inshaallah.......doa me yaad rakhen .......tc.....
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#22
10-11-2006, 03:53 PM
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AOA.DEAR ...afsana aur assifa aapke is tareef ka dil se shukriya.......aap logon ne pasand kiya hai to do aur post karti hun ..ummeed hai aap padhenge...thnx dear.........
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#23
10-11-2006, 03:54 PM
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thnx dear aap dono ka bahut shukriya ........
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#24
10-11-2006, 04:15 PM
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mistique aap shayed khud nahi likh paatin afsos.......tabhi dusron par shak karti hain.............tee sra comment hai ye aapka .................do jagah likh aai hun aapko........... thnx afsana dear...........
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#25
10-11-2006, 04:20 PM
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thnx dear afsana........... ab mujhe aapki aql par taras aaraha hai mistique ye 4th comment hai aapka........aap yahaan mod hain .aapko shayeri samjhna chahiye ye ek bahut bada forum hai .aapko likhne wale ka style janana chahiye saari meri poetry mere hi andaz me hai .......well i wud like to talk ur admin .its insulting now................. ...
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#26
10-11-2006, 04:44 PM
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#27
10-11-2006, 06:11 PM
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nice effort....khubsoorat khayalat haiN... magar yahaN bhi aapne qawafi ko nazar andaz kar diya aur plz aik din maiN aik poem share kijiye 1.gif ")1") khush rahiye
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#28
10-11-2006, 06:55 PM
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v nicely written janab...keep sharing n writing
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#29
10-11-2006, 08:34 PM
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achhi kavish rahi but plz txt clor yeh na rakha karein parhne main diqqat hoti hai
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#30
10-11-2006, 09:48 PM
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 Bouhat Umda Kawish Rahi Yeh Bhi...
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