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Mera Dil....

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Old 09-17-2006, 01:57 PM
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Mera dil aik shama tha

muqader jis ka jalna tha

kahain bhi is ko tum rakhtay

issay ik din pighlna tha

ager ye dhoop main hota

tou bus ik din hi ji pata

ager chaoon main rakh detay

to ye ik raat ji leta

ager sehra main rakh aatay

to ik aandhi main mit jata

jo rakh detay paharon per..

to ye pathar ka ho jata

kisi berfeeli rut ki zad main

ye barfaab ho jata....

jo tum aakash ko detay

koi urta hoa badal..

kisi habaab main rakh ker

zameen ki nazar ker jata

ager aankhon main tum rakhtay

ye aanso ban k beh jata

teri neendon main hota to..

ADHORA khawab ho jata..

magar ye ...dil........!

zara .....sa dil

teri muthi main hota tou..?

jo ab bhi hai

tou socho is ka kia hota?

teray hathon ki rekhaon main kho jata

bara "KHUSH BAKHT"ho jata...!!
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Old 09-17-2006, 02:36 PM
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wellcome on hg , nice poetry, keep it up
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Old 09-17-2006, 04:17 PM
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beautiful poem kanwal....v well @};-

but one thing ke aik ap aik din maiN aik hi nazam/ghazal share kia kijiye

khush raho
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Old 09-17-2006, 06:36 PM
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magar ye ...dil........!

zara .....sa dil

teri muthi main hota tou..?

(jo ab bhi hai.............)

tou socho is ka kia hota?

teray hathon ki rekhaon main kho jata

bara "KHUSH BAKHT"ho jata...!!

wahh kanwal ji very nice @};-
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nice post !
keep writing
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hmmmm.......

wah,,,,,,,,,,,,,

bohat acha likhti hain aap.......

keep sharing
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Aap Ki Aamad Poet Club Mai'n Nihayat Khush'Gawaar Izafa Hay...Aap Ki Yeh Naz Bhi Bharpoor Tasuraat Kay Saath Bouhat Pasand Aai..Daad Qubool Kijiye...
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salam

acha or kabiletaarif hai
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Old 09-17-2006, 09:24 PM
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Salam, ye sirf or sirf aap k husn-e-nazer ka kamaal hai bohat shukria

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