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This is a discussion on Mera Dil.... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Mera dil aik shama tha muqader jis ka jalna tha kahain bhi is ko tum rakhtay issay ik din pighlna ...
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| Mera dil aik shama tha muqader jis ka jalna tha kahain bhi is ko tum rakhtay issay ik din pighlna tha ager ye dhoop main hota tou bus ik din hi ji pata ager chaoon main rakh detay to ye ik raat ji leta ager sehra main rakh aatay to ik aandhi main mit jata jo rakh detay paharon per.. to ye pathar ka ho jata kisi berfeeli rut ki zad main ye barfaab ho jata.... jo tum aakash ko detay koi urta hoa badal.. kisi habaab main rakh ker zameen ki nazar ker jata ager aankhon main tum rakhtay ye aanso ban k beh jata teri neendon main hota to.. ADHORA khawab ho jata.. magar ye ...dil........! zara .....sa dil teri muthi main hota tou..? jo ab bhi hai tou socho is ka kia hota? teray hathon ki rekhaon main kho jata bara "KHUSH BAKHT"ho jata...!! |
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#2
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| wellcome on hg , nice poetry, keep it up |
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#3
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| beautiful poem kanwal....v well @};- but one thing ke aik ap aik din maiN aik hi nazam/ghazal share kia kijiye ![]() khush raho
__________________ Signature Removed - Image exceeds 650 px by 350 px Last edited by kanch ki mehroo; 09-18-2006 at 09:43 PM. |
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| magar ye ...dil........! zara .....sa dil teri muthi main hota tou..? (jo ab bhi hai.............) tou socho is ka kia hota? teray hathon ki rekhaon main kho jata bara "KHUSH BAKHT"ho jata...!! wahh kanwal ji very nice @};-
__________________ ![]() najanay kon duaaon mein yaad karta hay mein dobta hon, samndar uchal deta hay ...!! |
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#6
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| hmmmm....... wah,,,,,,,,,,,,, bohat acha likhti hain aap....... keep sharing
__________________ jo rukay to koh-e-giraan thay hum, jo chalay to jaan se guzer gaye rah-e-yaar hum nay qadam qadam tujhay yaadgaar bana diya |
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#7
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Aap Ki Aamad Poet Club Mai'n Nihayat Khush'Gawaar Izafa Hay...Aap Ki Yeh Naz Bhi Bharpoor Tasuraat Kay Saath Bouhat Pasand Aai..Daad Qubool Kijiye...![]()
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#8
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| salam acha or kabiletaarif hai
__________________ doorejadded ka meer hoon sadion ko yad rakhta hon mai taqqi oo dard ki khaaq hoon sahib hoon meer takhallus rakhta hoon meer |
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#9
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Salam, ye sirf or sirf aap k husn-e-nazer ka kamaal hai bohat shukria![]() Last edited by kanwal Hussain; 09-21-2007 at 01:51 AM. |