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RulesThis is a discussion on Mein Tujhay Uss Waqt Yaad AaooNga. within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Mein Tujhay Uss Waqt Yaad AaooNga. Jab Samandar May Chaand Utray Ga Koe Tara KaheeN Pay Tootay Ga Raat Ki ...
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04-27-2008, 10:53 PM
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Mein Tujhay Uss Waqt Yaad AaooNga. Jab Samandar May Chaand Utray Ga Koe Tara KaheeN Pay Tootay Ga Raat Ki Surd Si HawaooN May Koe Baadal KaheeN Pay Bersay Ga. Tery Chehray Pay Mah_o_Saal Ka Rang Jaal ShiknooN Ka B’un Chukka Hoga Tery HathooN Ki Sub LakirooN Kay Faisaly Waqt Ker Chukka Hoga Mein Tujhay Uss Waqt Yaad AaooNga. Jab Tery Roop Ki Chandi Waqt Ki Dhoop May Pighal Chukki Hogi Jab Teri Aankh Say SitarooN Ki Rooshni Bhi Nikal Chukki Hogi Jab Tery Gird Hujoom_e_YaraaN May Tera Talib Koe Na Theray Ga Aur Koe Deed Ka Tamanai Teray Pehlo May Aa Na Baithay Ga Mein Tujhay Uss Waqt Yaad AaooNga. Chandni JaN Jala_ay Gi Teri Tenhai Tujh Ko Kha_ay Gi Khud Ko Dhoondo Gay Meri NazmooN May Mujh Ko Dhoondo Gay Apni ShamooN May Mein Tujhay Phir Bohat SataooNga Mein KaheeN Bhi Nazar Na AaooNga Mein Tujhay Uss Waqt Yaad AaooNga. By Imran Kaify.                  |
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04-28-2008, 12:37 AM
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 wahhhh.. bohat hi umda nazm kahi aapne.. khayal bhi dilkash hai.. kuch lines maiN rawani toot'ti hui mehsoos hui.. kuch tabdeeliyaN kar k maine nazm rewrite ki hai.. daikhiye; ajnabi..! yad aaooN ga maiN tujhe Jab Samandar May Chaand Utray Ga Koe Tara KaheeN Pay Tootay Ga Raat Ki Surd Si HawaooN May Koe Baadal KaheeN Pay Bersay Ga. Tery Chehray Pay Mah_o_Saal Ka Rang Jaal ShiknooN Ka B’un Chukka Hoga Tery HathooN Ki Sub LakirooN Kay Faisaly Waqt Ker Chukka Hoga ajnabi..! yaad aooN ga maiN tujhe jab tere roop ki haseeN chandi dasht-e-hijraaN maiN jal chuki hogi Jab Teri Aankh Say SitarooN Ki Rooshni Bhi Nikal Chukki Hogi jab tere is hujoom-e-yaraaN maiN Tera Talib Koe Na Theray Ga Aur Koe Deed Ka Tamanai Teray Pehlo May Aa Na Baithay Ga ajnabi..! yad aaoonga maiN tujhe chandni jab jalaye gi tujh ko teri tanhai khaye gi tujh ko khud ko dhoonday gi meri nazmoN maiN mujh ko dhoonday gi apni shamoN maiN isqadar phir sataooN ga maiN tujhe haN nazar bhi na aooN ga maiN tujhe anjabi.. yad aaooN ga maiN tujhe likhtay rahiye k khoob likhtay haiN.. khush rahiye
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04-28-2008, 03:16 AM
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04-28-2008, 03:25 AM
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Imran Bohat acha takhayul aur bohat achi tehreer aap ki.....aur Mehroo ney is diamond ko tarash ker aur chamak aur husn ata ker diya hey....... Likhtey rahiye janab..... dil ki gehraaiyon sey isi tarah.... Kher andesh Qamar
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04-28-2008, 10:02 AM
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Hum tou apni yeh porani,bosseda si nazm posting say pehlay hi Aap ko dekhana chahtay thay lakin Aap bhi off line theeN aur Aap ka mailbox bhi full tha.Lekin shayyad yeh yunhi hona tha......hum nay yeh soch ker post kerdi k aap k alawa issay kaun parhay ga........Aap ka rewrite kerna hamaray leay hirf_e_akhir hay...Ab hum isko yuhi rakhain gay......aap ne theak kaha k is may kai jaga rawani tooti hay......shayyad jis waqt hum nay yeh likhi yhi tou hamari apni rawani bhi toot rahi thi.......Aap ki bohat nawazish.... likhtay rahiye k khoob likhtay haiN.. Aap ka yeh aik jumla hi hamaray leay tamghay say kum nahiN.......... |
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04-28-2008, 10:02 AM
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04-28-2008, 10:09 AM
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04-28-2008, 07:27 PM
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Mein Tujhay Uss Waqt Yaad AaooNga. 
