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This is a discussion on ...........marna chahta hon......... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Asalama alaikum ...... bohat hi taveel arsay k bad kuch share ker raha hon aap doston say..........us ki wajhay yeh ...
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| Asalama alaikum ...... bohat hi taveel arsay k bad kuch share ker raha hon aap doston say..........us ki wajhay yeh hai k itna arsa kuch bhi nahi likh paya........ aaj aik kafi purani likhi howi nazam zuba'n per thi tou socha aap say bhi share ki jaye.... " Marna chahta hoon" itni door musafat say thak sa gya hon kuch kerna chahta hon main ab! marna chahta hon................. ......
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#2
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| +o Subject Read Kar Kay Mai'n Yoo'n Reh Gai Thi +o Nazm Aap Nay Bouhat Achi Likhi Hay...Allah Aap Ko Salamat Rakhay Aameen...Nazm Ki Hadd Tak Yeh Khayaal Rehnay Dijiye Ga Bas... (hehe) Mairi Taraf Say Bouhat Si Daad Qubool Kijiye...Next Nazm Kay Liye Subject Day Rahi Hoo'n '' Jeena Chahta Hoo'n '' Aap To Acha Likh Laitay Hai'n Pata Nahi Kiyu'n Nahi Likhtay?
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#3
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| bohat achi nazam kahi aapne...magar sirf nazam ki had tak....is say aagay jayeNgay to hum sab aaray hathoN laiNgay apko ...to wapis aatay haiN nazam par...khubsoorat nazam kahi aapne...so dad qubool kijiye ![]() khush rahiye
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#4
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| Wahhh.....!!!!! as everyone said mani ...nazam ki hadd tak its wonderfull ...simply awsome ...par aap ............. bohat khoobsurat nazam .... khush rahiay .. Allah aap ko khush aur salaamat rakhay ....{khush pehlay bola hai } Allah Wairs
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#5
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| nazm '.......... marna chahta hoon.........' ......plz go ahead ... what are u waiting for ? just do it ... i m never gonna stop u ... nazm waisay bohut achhi thi ... KEEP IT UP! |
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#6
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| [quote=m4mani;2737302]Asalama alaikum ...... walikum asslam wah kiya hi ala paay ki nazam likhi hai aap ne bhae mujhe to bari hi achi lagai magar baaki haya and mehroo ki naseehat to aap parh hi chukey hain na bas wahi baat main kehti lekin ab itne logon ne keh to di to kiya yaad karein gay aap chor diya main ne
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#7
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| Walekum Assalam Kia baat hay bhai barii dardnak si nazam likhi hay sab thek thak hay na aur ye apne irade aur himat zara bahal rakahain girte hain shahsawar hi medan-e-jung main Keep trying Khush Rahiay ![]()
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#8
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Bhai sher bahut achaa hai ..bahut daad qubool kijiye aur aise hi humse apna likha share karte rahiye...hamesha khush rahein
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