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RulesThis is a discussion on Mari Walda Ki within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; MERI WALDA KI DUAO KA ASAR LAGTA HAI AB YEH SAJAR HARA BHARA DIKTA HAI JAB BHI HALAT SE GHABRA ...
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09-27-2007, 07:03 AM
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 MERI WALDA KI DUAO KA ASAR LAGTA HAI AB YEH SAJAR HARA BHARA DIKTA HAI JAB BHI HALAT SE GHABRA JATA THA APNI WALDA KE ANCHAL SE LIPAT JATA THA UNKI UMMEEDO PE KHARA UTRA ISLIYE ZAMANE SE JUDA NIKLA JUDA HO KE REH GAYA KHUD SE "NADEEM" CHEEN LIYA USNE JAB, YEH SAYA MUJH SE                  |
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09-27-2007, 10:32 AM
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 pehli bat to yeh k yeh ghazal nahiN, nazm hai... ghazal maiN qafiye radeef ki pabandi ki jati hai... doosri bat... lafz Zuda nahiN hota... Juda hota hai... jeem say.. 1.gif ")1") baqi.. koshish achi rahi... mashq-e-sukhan jari rakhiye.. khush rahiye
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09-28-2007, 06:27 AM
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AS-SALAM-O- ALAIKUM MEHROO JI, MAI KOSHISH KAROGA KI AIENDA SE GAZAL MAIN QAFIYE AUR RADEEF KI BANDIGI KI JAI AUR LAFZ ZUDA KO MAI JUDA KAR LETA HOO , MEHROO JI AGAR AAP ISEY NAZM KI THREAD MAIN MOVE KAR DE TO MEHERBANI HOGI.RAHNUMAI KA SHUKRIYA NADEEM |
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