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This is a discussion on Manzilein Mileen to within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Manzilein mileen to humsafar na rahay Wo mere hokay bhi mere na rahay Shab bhar jis k intizar mein guzar ...
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01-01-2007, 10:28 AM
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Manzilein mileen to humsafar na rahay Wo mere hokay bhi mere na rahay Shab bhar jis k intizar mein guzar dii Wo aagiya to mere sath chand taray na rahay Apna kahta aya mein jinhein umer bhar Aab akay kahtay hein wo humaray na rahay Thakan k ahsas k sath chalta raha tanha Rukna tha jaha jahan ,wo saharay na rahay Har waqt apnay honay ka ahsas dilata raha "Humair" KHUDA k sath honay par hum kabhi tanha na rahay
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#2
01-08-2007, 07:58 PM
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nice effort Humair....magar abhi qafiya aur wazan ke hawalay say ghazal islah talab hai... 1.gif ")1") aur aik bat ke aik din maiN aik hi poem share kijiye...basoorat-e-deegar threads merge kar di jayengi.. khush rahiye
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01-09-2007, 09:43 AM
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bohat khoob janab... achi ghazal kahi aap nay keep sharing
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01-15-2007, 07:39 PM
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aslaamoaleakum....th ank u frnds.......& kanch ki mehrooo ....i know meri poetry mein still kafi sari mistakes hoti hein.....so mein try karon gaa k next time ghaltiyan na hon....but agr hon to plz indicate zaroor kariay gaa thanks once again take care Allah hafiz
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