Urdu Poetry Forum

AOA
Yeh silsila aik baar phir haazir hai (sorry Asma late hoonai ka) .

iss kai rules mei aap ko bata doon

Rules
1...Manzer kashi kerni hai...aap Nazam Ya Nasar ki soorat mei jaisa aap ka jee chahay.

2...Koshish karain kai Manzar-Kashi mei bohat halkai phulkai moozoo hoon.

3...Mei aap ko misaal daiti hoon kai Manzer agar kisi gaoon ka hai tou woh gaoon kahain sehra(desert) mei bhi hoo sakta hai.....paharoon ka hoo sakta hai maidaani hoo sakta hai.....ya kisi dariya kai kinaaray...kahain bhi.....aor manzer mei kitni khoobsoorti aor kitni haqeeqat hoo ge yeh aap kai likhnai kai andaaz per munhasir hai .

4...Manzer Talkh bhi hoo sakta hai....aor uss mei Mizah bhi hoo sakta hai.

TOPIC (Gaaoon Ka Manzer)
ub yeh Asool aap per kuch wazih hoo gayee hoon gay....tou phir ub hum aaj kai Topic ka aghaaz kertay hain....Subhoo ka Manzer pehlai hoo chuka hai iss liye mei ub uss ko doobara nahi karoon ge....hum apni misaal sai hi aghaaz kertay hain.

Ub aap loog Aghaaz karain InshaAllah mei bhi apnai Manzer kai saath phir aap ki khidmat mei haazir hooti hoon
Khush rahain @};- .

koi gall nai kuriye /cig .... dair aaye dhrram dhrram /bouncer bomber topic laaye ;D ...


Really nice topic.... Looking forward to see people's contributions /flower

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Really nice topic.... Looking forward to see people's contributions /flower [/b][/quote]
Nahi laikin mei chati thi kai pehla Manzer tum likhoo.....foran /hugs /ura

<!--QuoteBegin-BePaki*)+Jul 24 2003, 11:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (BePaki*) @ Jul 24 2003, 11:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Asma+Jul 24 2003, 03:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Asma @ Jul 24 2003, 03:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> koi gall nai kuriye&nbsp; /cig .... dair aaye dhrram dhrram /bouncer bomber topic laaye&nbsp; ;D ...


Really nice topic.... Looking forward to see people's contributions&nbsp; /flower [/b][/quote]
Nahi laikin mei chati thi kai pehla Manzer tum likhoo.....foran /hugs /ura [/b][/quote]
foran walay kaam nahin aatay mujhay ;p ..... I will InshAllah contribute with something too /flower

3 Manzar likh kay delete kiyeah hain ab tuk... itnay manzir hain kay koi aik manzir nahi tik raha ya shaid.. woh jo manzar kaheen la'shaoor mein baitha hai woh lafzoon mein dhal nahi raha.. bohat wasee mazmoon dai dia hai aap nay.. gaoon.. agar aap kahain aik chootay say ghar ka manzar bata daita hoon.. woh ghar jo jheel kinaray hai.. jeehl woh jo gahree sabz rung ke hai.. jis kay kinaray unchay lambay darkhtoon ke aik kitaar hai.. jo janay kitnay barsoon say kharee hai.. aur sath mein charoon aur asmaan ko chootay pahaar kharay pehra dai rahay hain.. jheel kay beechoon peech.. aik chota sa jazeera bana howa hai.. jis mein sirf do darakhat hain.. jo shaid kabhi kissi mohabat kay divanay nay shaid kissi ke yaad mein lagaye thai.. aab tu woh phaloon say ladday rehtay hain.. ussi chootay say jaeeray mein jiss ka hujam buss itna hee hai kay aab uss pay aur kuch nahi sirf sakoon paa saktay hain.. haan ussi jazeeray pay aik kinaray pay .. kuch phool ogay hain.. aisee sondhee khushboo walay.. aisay shoukh rangoon wallay.. phool kabhi na daikhay hum nay. iss kinray tuk un kee baas aati hai.. ik kashish hai un mein jo khud mein bandh laiti hai... samnay kharay buland paharoon ke chootiyaan abhi tuk barf mein dhaki hoi hain................ ......!!!





Iss manzar ko adhoora chor raha hoon.. kay yeah Gaoon kay manzar say mutabqat nahi rakhta.. !! Yeah tu aik chootay say kachay ghar ka manzar hai.. /happy haan koshish karoon ga jald aik gaoon... kay manzir kay sath aoon aap dostoon ke khidmat mein...

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<!--QuoteBegin-Basit+Jul 24 2003, 12:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Basit @ Jul 24 2003, 12:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> 3 Manzar likh kay delete kiyeah hain ab tuk... itnay manzir hain kay koi aik manzir nahi tik raha ya shaid.. woh jo manzar kaheen la'shaoor mein baitha hai woh lafzoon mein dhal nahi raha.. bohat wasee mazmoon dai dia hai aap nay.. gaoon.. agar aap kahain aik chootay say ghar ka manzar bata daita hoon.. woh ghar jo jheel kinaray hai.. jeehl woh jo gahree sabz rung ke hai.. jis kay kinaray unchay lambay darkhtoon ke aik kitaar hai.. jo janay kitnay barsoon say kharee hai.. aur sath mein charoon aur asmaan ko chootay pahaar kharay pehra dai rahay hain.. jheel kay beechoon peech.. aik chota sa jazeera bana howa hai.. jis mein sirf do darakhat hain.. jo shaid kabhi kissi mohabat kay divanay nay shaid kissi ke yaad mein lagaye thai.. aab tu woh phaloon say ladday rehtay hain.. ussi chootay say jaeeray mein jiss ka hujam buss itna hee hai kay aab uss pay aur kuch nahi sirf sakoon paa saktay hain.. haan ussi jazeeray pay aik kinaray pay .. kuch phool ogay hain.. aisee sondhee khushboo walay.. aisay shoukh rangoon wallay.. phool kabhi na daikhay hum nay. iss kinray tuk un kee baas aati hai.. ik kashish hai un mein jo khud mein bandh laiti hai... samnay kharay buland paharoon ke chootiyaan abhi tuk barf mein dhaki hoi hain................ ......!!!

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aisay manzar sirf humaray khayalo'n main hi kyon miltay hain....
meray room main aik paintin lagi hai ... aik darya hai barish ho rahi hai or aik chota sa ghar hai.... kuch us say milta julta laga...

yaaro .... villages to har paasay hotay hain /cig ... ghaur karo na zara aap log ;) ... yahan Europe, US etc. mein bhi to hotay hain... zaroori to nahin PK ka hi gaaon ho ..... even though PK kay gaaon ki alag hi baat hai ji ;D ... jaisay kay main apni naani ammi kay gaaon khaito'n mein say gaajrai'n aur gongloooooo churaya karti thi .... he he he he ... sair ko nikaltay to bhook bohut lagti thi /hungry ... :p ....

Anyways any village can be described .... and if not.. then usually we imagine unseen things in a certain way... aap ki imagination ka description bhi chalay ga /senior



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very good

sab bateen kar rahay hain manzar koee nahi likh raha ;)


gaon ka manzar bananay kay liya yeh ashya darkar hain


bohat khuli zameen
kachay pakkay makaan , jo aik dosray se door door hain
pak dandyan
aik adad nadi ya nala
chakki ki tuk tuk ki awaz
khet khalyaan
tube well ka pani
prinday, maal movaishi, dhoor dangar

yeh gaoon app kaheen par bhi bana leen , thar main ya cholistan main, kisi chak gaaf bay main, yaa pothohaar main, sibbi main yaa chaman main . . .kahin bhi

aur agar Punjabi film ka masala chahay

too

lachay kurtay wali mutyaareen
bari pagri walay chohdri sahib
gandaasay walay ghabroo jawan

aur haan

agar aik patwari bhi ho too tarka lag jay ga

kyon jee
hoeee kuch manzar kashi /thinking