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#11 07-29-2003, 06:58 PM

Asma tum nai bhi Manzer nahi lagaya abhi tak /angry

azharulhaq
aap nai tou waqai bara mazai ka amnzer biyan ker diya batoon batoon mei

#12 07-29-2003, 10:25 PM

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (BePaki*) @ Jul 29 2003, 08:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Asma tum nai bhi Manzer nahi lagaya abhi tak /angry

azharulhaq
aap nai tou waqai bara mazai ka amnzer biyan ker diya batoon batoon mei [/b][/quote]
I dont know your real name, magar mera kaam hi yeh hai kay batoon batoon main baat kar jaoo

I hope you like that, thanx

#13 07-30-2003, 12:22 PM

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (BePaki*) @ Jul 29 2003, 04:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>Asma tum nai bhi Manzer nahi lagaya abhi tak /angry

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:blush ..... abhi laati houn likh kar ;D

#14 07-30-2003, 10:34 PM

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (azharulhaq @ Jul 29 2003, 08:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>very good

sab bateen kar rahay hain manzar koee nahi likh raha  ;)

gaon ka manzar bananay kay liya yeh ashya darkar hain

bohat khuli zameen
kachay pakkay makaan , jo aik dosray se door door hain
pak dandyan
aik adad nadi ya nala
chakki ki tuk tuk ki awaz
khet khalyaan
tube well ka pani
prinday, maal movaishi, dhoor dangar

yeh gaoon app kaheen par bhi bana leen , thar main ya cholistan main, kisi chak gaaf bay main, yaa pothohaar main, sibbi main yaa chaman main . . .kahin bhi

aur agar Punjabi film ka masala chahay

too

lachay kurtay wali mutyaareen
bari pagri walay chohdri sahib
gandaasay walay ghabroo jawan

aur haan

agar aik patwari bhi ho too  tarka lag jay ga

kyon jee
hoeee kuch manzar kashi  /thinking[/b][/quote]
he he he he ... /good good one ji ! ... ab isay paka kar kha jaatay hain /hungry

And btw .. Welcome to HG and Writer's Club /hug

/flower

#15 08-06-2003, 06:44 PM

bohat umda topic shuroo kiya hai...main bhi keyboard uthanay ki jasaarat ker rahi hooN...

GaooN.....sheher ki taraf say pakki sarak per mashriq ki taraf rukh kerain to raastay mein sersoN k peelay khaitoN ka waseee silsila nazar aai ga ....sarak k donoN atraaf mein phailay huay yeh khait taa hadd e nazar tak dikhai daitay hain.....yooon lagta hai k aap chaltay jaen gaay chaltay jaen gaay or yeh khoobsoorat manzer peely peely sersoN or kachi pakki pagdandi kabhi khatm nahi hogy.......lakin aisa nahi hai...aap is pagdandi per chalna shuroo kerain to aap ko apnay atraaf mein mehanty or mazboot loag kaam kertay nazar aaeN gaay.....aajkal kiyon k sersoN phool chuki hai...to katai ka moasam hai...boorhay or jawan apny mehnat ka phal kaat rahay haiN...subah sawairay ka waqt hai...fizza mein aik ajeeb c thandak or mehek hai...shayad sersoN ki...ya phir door us taraf kachay gharoN say uth tay huay lakri k choolhay ki...jis per chaye pak ker aik ajeeb hi sondy c khushbu phaila rahi hai...or saath hi roty ki mehek ....k bhoook na bhi lagi ho to lag jaye.... thora or aagay jaen gaay to guy or bakriyoN ki aawazain sunaye dein gy...jo k subah subah khailnay koodnay or khanay peenay k liay nikly haiN...aray wo kiya.... suna?... kitny khoobsurat baaNsury baja raha hai wo lerka...peepal k pair k neechay ...acha yehi to hai in jaanwaroN ka nigran jis ki bansury ki dhun per jaanwer to kiya insan bhi must haiN....or wo rangeen aaNchal kis ka hai...jo koi bhi hai ...bary shareer hai...aaNkhoN mein masoomiyat liay bansury ki dhun per muskuraty hai...or jaisay hi wo us ki taraf dekhta hai to apna munh gharay k peechay chupa laity hai...wo akaily nahi us k saath or bhi lerkiyaN haiN...gharoN mein pani bhernay aai hain...kuwaiN per ....baary baary pani bhi bherty ja rahi haiN or aik doosray ko bhigoty ja rahi haiN..chul-lu mein pani bher bher ker....wo jo saamnay derwaza nazer aa raha hai..us k doosry taraf aik aaNgan hai...jis k konay mein choolhay per kuch pak raha hai.... aik khatoon aata goondh rahi haiN...or choty c aik bachi aangan mein jharoo day rahi hai......abhi jab khana pak jaye ga or gharay mein pani bher ker wapas aa jaye ga to yeh khana khaitoN mein kaam kernay waloN k liay bheja jaye ga....khanay ka kaam samait ker sersoN jo k khaitoN say cut ker aai hai ghathoN mein baandhni hai.... shaam ho rahi hai...thakay haaray panchi gheroN ko loat ker aa rahay haiN...pair k neechay bajnay wali baNsury ruk gaye hai.....ab aik baray maidaan mein jis k donoN taraf khoob ooNchay ooNchay sheesham or neem k pair haiN....palaNg bichay nazar aa rahay haiN..saaray jawan boorhay or khawateen jama haiN....yeh in ka roze ka maamool hai....bachay alag khail rahay haiN...aik konay say halki c khuser phuser sunai daity hai...us k baad dabi dabi khoobsurat c hansi ki aawazaiN...noJawanoN ki alag mehfil hai....gherz k raat gaay tak apni kahi jaty hai or doosroN ki suni jaty hai....yahaN sab ka dukh aik hai...or sab ki khushiyaN sanjhi hai

yeh gaooN hai...sukh chain ka
jahaN sab k dukh bhi aik haiN
or sab ki khushiyaN saanjhi haiN..
jahaN sersoN rung bakhairty hai...
jahaN chaandni basti ghairty hai...
yeh GaooN hai.... sukh chain ka

:blush shayad kuch ziada hi likh gaee jazbaat mein aa ker...waisay yeh gaooN sirf mairay tasawwur ka gaooN hai...umeed hai k pasand aaye ga @};-

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