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This is a discussion on manind-e-shajar hara bhara huN within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; as-salam-o-alaikum dosto! kuch arse bad phir se aik ghazal k le kr aaya huN, apni aara se zuroor nawazi'ay ga... ...
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#1
09-22-2007, 10:46 AM
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as-salam-o-alaikum dosto! kuch arse bad phir se aik ghazal k le kr aaya huN, apni aara se zuroor nawazi'ay ga... to ghazal mulahiza ho:  ================== manind-e-shajar hara bhara huN lekin meiN jaRoN se hil chuka huN jana tha kahiN pe mujh ko lekin saman-e-safar se gir gya huN haysi'yat-e-zindgi hi kya hy, jab mot se mil k aa raha huN chaho to mujhy saja lo dil pr, huN daagh, mager maiN khush numa huN mehfil meiN to apny sath hi tha tanhaei meiN khud se kho gya huN manga tha khuda se khud ko maiN ne, daman meiN kisi k aa gira huN, mehfooz huN ab khush k hathoN, aaghosh meiN gham ki aa gya huN jis ka bhi huN wo uTha le aa kr rsty meiN kahiN paRa hua huN, ghabra k maiN aaj phir se faizan, pehlu se khud apny aa laga huN... ================== khush raheN aabad raheN...
__________________ tu na jadoN paas channaN! key ay saady paas way, din vi udaas saady, rataaN vi udaas way, luT gya chain sadaa, rus gye hassay way, khushiaN ny dur nssiaN... akhaN cham cham wssiaN!!!         |
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#2
09-22-2007, 11:29 AM
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jana tha kahee'n pe mujh ko leiken saaman-e-safar se gir gaya hon.. wahhh... behad khoob.. janab-e-Faizan.. umdah ghazal hai .. muddat baad aap ka likha parh ker lutaf aa gaya.. silsila jari rakhiye ga.. dhairo'n daad-o-mubarakbaad hamari janib se qabool kijiye..  wafa aur dua ke saath withlove
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#3
09-22-2007, 01:28 PM
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acho ghazal kahi aap ne .. muje us din ka intezaar rahe ga jis din aap apni zaat ke hassar se nikal kar qainaat ke mukhtalif taghuraat ko apni shairi ka mahiyaar banayeen gay ... aap ka mukhlis irshad qamar ei sheer deekheen ab saara asmaan meri dastras mein hai nazreen utha kissi bi sitare ki baat kar
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#4
09-22-2007, 04:11 PM
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aachi gazal kahi faizan bahi aap ne
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#5
09-22-2007, 04:51 PM
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chaho to mujhe saja lo dil per hoon daag mager mein khush numa hoon mehhooz houn ub khushi k haathoun aagoush mein gham ki aa gaya hon buhat khoob WT .................... .. kafi arse baad aap ne share ki acha laga ................. keep sharing .................... ... but not tht much late 
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#6
09-22-2007, 06:16 PM
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jana tha kaheeN pe mujh ko lekin saman-e-safar se gir gaya hooN manga tha Khuda se khud ko maiN ne daman maiN kisi ke a giraa hooN chaho to mujhe saja lo dil par hooN dagh magar maiN khush numa hooN Wah...Faizan Bhai...wah kia baat hai...bohot hi umda..behad haseen...dheron daad qubool kijye |
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#7
09-22-2007, 06:19 PM
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eik baar phir eik umdah ghazal k saath aapki aamad bhali maloom hui.. 1.gif ")1") tamam ashar hi qabil-e-tehseen hain .. daad qubool kijiye khush rahiye sadaa
__________________  . . Tere is jahaN maiN aye Khuda..woh nahi to lagta hai kuch nahi |
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#8
09-22-2007, 08:45 PM
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Asslamo alikum faizan bohut arsey bad aap k kalam se faiz yab hone ka moka mil raha hai bas meri na ahli keh lein k guzishta kai dinon se hg se ghyab thi so aap ki itne khub surat kalam se door rahi likha aap ne humesha ki tarha acha hai lekin abhi aap ki pichli kuch kavishon ka nasha dilo dimagh pe taari hai so thora time lagay ga aap ki nai kavishon ko dil main jagah paane k liye INSHALLAH ab aati jaati rahoon gi to aap ka naya kalam se bhi mustafid hoti rahoon gi daad qubool kijye aur khush rahye
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#10
09-23-2007, 01:50 PM
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walikum asalam.. aik martaba phir.. bohat khhubsoorat ghazal kahi Faizan apne... mashAllah... aisay hi likhtay rahiye.. aur bohat khush rahiye
__________________  . . . Mere dil.. Mere musaafir..! |
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