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This is a discussion on Mana mizaj-e-yar dil aazar hai bahut within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Afzal Saheb Bohat achi ghazal kahi aap ney Daad hazir hay Sher #3 ko zara dobara dekh li jiye....meri naqis ...
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| Afzal Saheb Bohat achi ghazal kahi aap ney Daad hazir hay Sher #3 ko zara dobara dekh li jiye....meri naqis raaey mein baat kuch ban naheen rahi Khaksar Qamar
__________________ Kyun Teri Chashm-e mast ka ehsaaN uthaaiye Zehrab-e may sey ho gham-e hasti ager ghalat |
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#12
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| bohat achi ghazal likhi ap ne afzal sahab isi tarha likhye aur share karye apna khayal rakhyega |
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#13
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| Esteemed brother.......it would be my pleasure if you would pinpoint the inappropriateness in the mentioned verse.i shall remain thankful to you for your guidance,
__________________ Afzal Chaudhry +92-314-5486159 |
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#14
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| Afzal saheb, Aik achi ghazal kay liey daad qabool kijiey. |
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#16
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| Thanks for encouragement....... ...God bless you. |
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#17
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| Thanks.........may you live long. |
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#18
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| Phirta hai le ke hath mein kushkol kis leay Afzal wo daikhne mein to khuddar hai bahut very nice .................... .
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#19
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| Thanks for this reinforcement....... ..God bless you. |
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