Urdu Poetry Forum

<!--QuoteBegin-Fari Khan+Sep 10 2003, 09:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Fari Khan @ Sep 10 2003, 09:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> AssalamoAlekum Umeed ki kiran jee

please change the format

poem achi hai but format is making it hard to read

thank !
take care

/hugs [/b][/quote]
yeh kuch kernay keranay walay kaam na kaha kero mujh say .. /buribat

/hugs

<!--QuoteBegin-Iqra+Sep 10 2003, 10:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Iqra @ Sep 10 2003, 10:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> buhat khoob ... /weldone

its really good one ..thx for sharin /flower [/b][/quote]
THanks Iqra .. /hug ... keep reading /flowers

<!--QuoteBegin-tahirraza+Sep 10 2003, 10:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (tahirraza @ Sep 10 2003, 10:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> salam


very nice effort , bohoot acha likha ahy kiran app nay . thanx for sharing @};- @};-



tahir [/b][/quote]
w/salam Tahir bhai @};-

Hausla afzaii per mamnoon hooN ..

Khush rahaiN @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-sarosh khan+Sep 11 2003, 11:41 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (sarosh khan @ Sep 11 2003, 11:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> kiran bohot khubsorat likha hai keep on writing dear tum bohot accha likhti ho
take care
khush raho [/b][/quote]
Shukriya Khanum .. /hug .. yeah sure I ll keep on writing .. @};-

Khush raho /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-GHAZAAL+Sep 11 2003, 05:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (GHAZAAL @ Sep 11 2003, 05:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Umeed Ki Kiran+Sep 10 2003, 07:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Umeed Ki Kiran @ Sep 10 2003, 07:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> [color= Maroon]
Aay mairay Jaan e wafa ja to rahay ho phir bhi
janay say pehlay zara baat to sun lo mairy
main na rokooN gy na hi poochooN gi janay ka jawaaz
lakin ek baat hai her lamha jo terpaye gy
mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!

Sochty hooN k main ab baagh mein jaya na kerooN
or in kaliyoN say gajra maiN banaya na kerooN
ab yooN hi baaloN ko apnay main sajaya na kerooN
phir bhi ek baat hai keh dooN jo ijazat ho tery
Motiay ki yeh kali phool jo ban jaye gy
Mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!

Chaahay khil jaeN sab hi phool mairay gulshan k
chaahay her samt dikhaye yeh naay roop bahaar
main lagaooN gi na surkhi na hi kajray ki wo dhaar
lakin ek baat main kehty hooN zara tum sun lo
jab bhi saawan ki jhary mairy gali aaye gy
mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!

ab na hogy tairay aanay ki koi aas, Umeed
tairay yeh saaray khat ab k main jala daalooN gy
ab na hoga mujhay yooN taira intezaar kabhi
phir bhi kehty hooN k itna to abhi haq hai maira
jab bhi aahat koi derwaazay peh der aaye gy
mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!

sonay ko raat main jaldi hi chali jaooN gy
khole k khirki ko kamray meiN andhera ker k
Munh ko main apnay phir takiay meiN yooN chupaooN gy
phir bhi yeh baat pareshaan hai kerty mujh ko
chaand niklay ga... mujhay neend nahi aaye gy
mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!


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Aray Wahhhhh Buhaat khubsuraat /flower /flower /flower .Nihayaat hi piyara andaz-e-bayyan hay (l) .Buhaat pasand aya. [/b][/quote]
So very Nice of You Ghazaal .. /hugs ... pasandeedgi per mamnoon hooN .. ..

Khush rahaiN /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-kanwal+Sep 11 2003, 06:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (kanwal @ Sep 11 2003, 06:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Umeed Ki Kiran+Sep 10 2003, 07:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Umeed Ki Kiran @ Sep 10 2003, 07:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> [color= Maroon]
Aay mairay Jaan e wafa ja to rahay ho phir bhi
janay say pehlay zara baat to sun lo mairy
main na rokooN gy na hi poochooN gi janay ka jawaaz
lakin ek baat hai her lamha jo terpaye gy
mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!

Sochty hooN k main ab baagh mein jaya na kerooN
or in kaliyoN say gajra maiN banaya na kerooN
ab yooN hi baaloN ko apnay main sajaya na kerooN
phir bhi ek baat hai keh dooN jo ijazat ho tery
Motiay ki yeh kali phool jo ban jaye gy
Mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!

Chaahay khil jaeN sab hi phool mairay gulshan k
chaahay her samt dikhaye yeh naay roop bahaar
main lagaooN gi na surkhi na hi kajray ki wo dhaar
lakin ek baat main kehty hooN zara tum sun lo
jab bhi saawan ki jhary mairy gali aaye gy
mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!

ab na hogy tairay aanay ki koi aas, Umeed
tairay yeh saaray khat ab k main jala daalooN gy
ab na hoga mujhay yooN taira intezaar kabhi
phir bhi kehty hooN k itna to abhi haq hai maira
jab bhi aahat koi derwaazay peh der aaye gy
mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!

sonay ko raat main jaldi hi chali jaooN gy
khole k khirki ko kamray meiN andhera ker k
Munh ko main apnay phir takiay meiN yooN chupaooN gy
phir bhi yeh baat pareshaan hai kerty mujh ko
chaand niklay ga... mujhay neend nahi aaye gy
mairay dildaar tairy yaad bohat aaye gy !!


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yar kiran bohat hi achi piari poem he
par tum kahan gum ho online bhi nahi aati ho...?
kadi kadi te aaya karo na /flower [/b][/quote]
Bohat shukriya Pyary sahaili /flower
main yaheen hoon mujhay kahan jana hai .. .. tum apni kaho .. /jin
haan online kam aaty hoon aajkal .... tum PM kiya kero na mujhay .. /hugs

Khush raho /flower

<!--QuoteBegin-Umeed Ki Kiran+Sep 12 2003, 09:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Umeed Ki Kiran @ Sep 12 2003, 09:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Iqra+Sep 10 2003, 10:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Iqra @ Sep 10 2003, 10:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> buhat khoob ... /weldone

its really good one ..thx for sharin&nbsp; /flower [/b][/quote]
THanks Iqra .. /hug ... keep reading /flowers [/b][/quote]
ur welcome dear .. yeah sure

keep writing n sharin /flower

good @};-

<!--QuoteBegin-Umeed Ki Kiran+Sep 12 2003, 09:25 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Umeed Ki Kiran @ Sep 12 2003, 09:25 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-Fari Khan+Sep 10 2003, 09:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr> <td>QUOTE (Fari Khan @ Sep 10 2003, 09:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> AssalamoAlekum Umeed ki kiran jee

please change the format

poem achi hai but format is making it hard to read

thank !
take care

/hugs [/b][/quote]
yeh kuch kernay keranay walay kaam na kaha kero mujh say .. /buribat

/hugs [/b][/quote]
Hmmmmm kiun r u kaam chore

acha chalo naa karo its fine with every one else so ...

Very nice poetry

take care /hugs