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This is a discussion on Main dikha doun ga unhain sooruj pe chul ker bhi kabhi within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Afzal SaaHeb khushaamdeed bohat acha sher hay Phool ki patti pe likh ker bhaijta main khat tujhay Rukh hawaoun ke ...
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| Afzal SaaHeb khushaamdeed bohat acha sher hay Phool ki patti pe likh ker bhaijta main khat tujhay Rukh hawaoun ke mager mayre isharoun per nahin aatay rehihay aur apna kalam share kertay rehaiN regards sohail
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#12
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Thanks for this cordiality.......... ..may God perpetuate your pleasures.
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#13
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| Thanks for inspiring words............God bless you. |
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#14
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| v nice buhat achi lagi apki kavish khubsurat lafzon ka chunayo acha laga uhi acha acha likhtay rahay ore share b kertay rahay all the best regards shazlayhassan
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Thanks for this condescension....... ...may God perpetuate your pleasures. |
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#16
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| wellcome at halla gulla aap ki ghazal peri bohat acha laga itni achi kwaish likhnay pay bohat bohat ziada daad qabool kerin ore isi terha share kertay reain future main. bohat bohat ziada duaan kay sath jahan rahian bohat khush rahin imran
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#17
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![]() Janab buhat he umdah ghazal kahi hay app ne Bara lutf aya app ki ghazal parh kar tamam he ashaar behad haseen hain Yaqenan app aik acha izafa hain is bazm main Aik baat zara si khatak rahi thi socha app se share kardon, gu k ham bhi abhi ramooz sekhne k ibtadai marahil main he hain aur shayad k mera point sahi na hoo. App ki ghazal ki Wazn/Behar hay 2122-2122-2122-212Magar mujhe shair # 02 k misra-e-sani main wazn kuch garbar laga q k us ki taqtee bethti hay 2122-2122-2122-2212, Shayad Qawafi ki waja se wazn main prb aa rahi hay, ye meri apni analysis hay jo k ghalat bhi hosakti hay. Umed app ko bura nahi lagay ga Buhat khush Rahiay aur isi tarah se apne kalam share karte rahiay ![]()
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#18
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| Thanks to all for such inspiring words.May God perpetuate your pleasures ! |