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Main dikha doun ga unhain sooruj pe chul ker bhi kabhi

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Old 04-21-2007, 01:49 PM
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Afzal SaaHeb khushaamdeed

bohat acha sher hay

Phool ki patti pe likh ker bhaijta main khat tujhay

Rukh hawaoun ke mager mayre isharoun per nahin

aatay rehihay aur apna kalam share kertay rehaiN

regards
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Doob ker daikha hai main ne payar ke deriya mein aaj

Jo maza munjdhar mein hai wo kinaroun per nahin

khoobsurat........

hum aap ko is bazm mein khushaamdeed kahtay hain faypal...bahot khoobsurat ghazal share ki hai aap ne...keep sharing & enjoy ur stay here

Thanks for this cordiality.......... ..may God perpetuate your pleasures.
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buhat khoobsurat sharing
Keep sharing Faypal

WELCOME TO HG (welcome) Hope u enjoy ur stay here
Thanks for inspiring words............God bless you.
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v nice buhat achi lagi apki kavish khubsurat lafzon ka chunayo acha laga uhi acha acha likhtay rahay ore share b kertay rahay
all the best
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v nice buhat achi lagi apki kavish khubsurat lafzon ka chunayo acha laga uhi acha acha likhtay rahay ore share b kertay rahay
all the best
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wellcome at halla gulla
aap ki ghazal peri bohat acha laga itni achi kwaish likhnay pay bohat bohat ziada daad qabool kerin ore isi terha share kertay reain future main.

bohat bohat ziada duaan kay sath
jahan rahian bohat khush rahin
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Janab buhat he umdah ghazal kahi hay app ne
Bara lutf aya app ki ghazal parh kar tamam he ashaar behad haseen hain
Yaqenan app aik acha izafa hain is bazm main

Aik baat zara si khatak rahi thi socha app se share kardon, gu k ham bhi abhi ramooz sekhne k ibtadai marahil main he hain aur shayad k mera point sahi na hoo.

App ki ghazal ki Wazn/Behar hay 2122-2122-2122-212Magar mujhe shair # 02 k misra-e-sani main wazn kuch garbar laga q k us ki taqtee bethti hay 2122-2122-2122-2212, Shayad Qawafi ki waja se wazn main prb aa rahi hay, ye meri apni analysis hay jo k ghalat bhi hosakti hay. Umed app ko bura nahi lagay ga
Buhat khush Rahiay aur isi tarah se apne kalam share karte rahiay
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Thanks to all for such inspiring words.May God perpetuate your pleasures !
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