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RulesThis is a discussion on Mai Rona Chahti Hun.... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Bund Muthi Mai Wakt ko qaid ker k... apni zaat ko khona chahti hun Mai rona chahti hun... Sadiyo se ...
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#1
07-10-2007, 10:32 AM
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Bund Muthi Mai Wakt ko qaid ker k... apni zaat ko khona chahti hun Mai rona chahti hun... Sadiyo se kabhi jo bheegi na un palko ko bhigona chahti hun mai rona chahti hun... Khoye sabhi rishto ko paya kabhi jo na mene unhe ik bar phir se khona chahti hun mai rona chahti hun... bikhray sab hi motio ko aik baar phir se pirona chahti hun mai rona chahti hun woh jo soye na kabhi sukoon se nadaa'n Lahad mai akhri neend sona chahti hun mai rona chahti hun.... (shehroon) Pehli bar apni poetry shair ker rahi hun...share kerte hoye acha nahi lag raha pata nahi kiu...mujeh aysa lagta hay k ap apni poetry share ker k apni thoughts aur thinkin ko dosro k sath share kerte ho...aur is tarah insaan khuli kitab ki manand ho jata hay jisay saray aam sab parh sakte hen..lekin mai apni poetry mai sudhaar lana chahti hun aur hamare section moderator zain ke hosla afzai se..mai apni aik poetry share ker rahi hun..is mai bohat si ghaltia hongi aur shayad koi yeh kahe k mujeh likhna nahi ata..lekin mai yeh samjti hun k ap apni soch ko lafzo mai dhaal rahe hote ho...yeh meri aik choti si koshish hay..likha tou mene aur bhi hay lekin rules k mutabik aik din mai aik hi poetry share kerungi...
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#2
07-10-2007, 11:14 AM
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aap ne theek kaha ke apni poetry share karna goya khud ko khuli kitab ki manind zaher karna hai lekin yeh bhi to hai na ke hamare aksar khyalat aur ahsasat sabhi ke hote hain.sabhi jazabat ko usi tarah mahsoos karte hain jaise hum.aur woh sher ki shakl main zyada mossar ho jate hain. aap ki yeh kavish bahut khoobsurat lagi.aap zaroor likhti rahein.meri pur khuloos daad aap ki is kavish ki nazar.
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#3
07-10-2007, 12:16 PM
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Salam haan yeh bhi theek hay k yeh ahsasat sab hi k hote hen......... yehi soch ker tou poetry share ki hay...... aur sochne mai bohat din laga diye ..... lekin kya ap logo k sath bhi aysa hota hay jab ap poetry share kerte hen ..ya sirif mere sath ho raha hay ......kiu k apni likhi hoye poetries mai sirif ab tak apne liye likhte hun apne friendz ko bhi dikhate hoye mujeh sharam ati hay .... aap ki daad ka behad shukria..plz ap sath sath yeh bhi bata den k Ghazal aur Nazam k beech mai simple diffrence kya hay ? kiu k mujeh yeh sab theek tarah nahi pata... |
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#4
07-10-2007, 12:17 PM
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ager kahin koi ghalti hay tou plz woh bhi batain sath sath.. 1.gif ")1") |
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#5
07-10-2007, 06:57 PM
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#6
07-10-2007, 09:00 PM
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bahot khoob Hunny saaheba,nazam aap ne bahot achhi kahi hai,bahot achha laha par ke,so daad qabool kijiye,  aap ki nazam main bahot si khaamiyaan nazar aayeen,lekin yeh koyi ghabraaney ya pareshaan honey ki baat naheen hai,yeh khaamiyaan aesi naheen hai jin ko door na kiya ja sakey,bas mehnat shart hai,.......aap bhi mehnat aor mashq-e-sukhan jaari rakhiye,aor ustaad shaairon ko baghor parain,bahot behtari aaye gi kalaam main,........neechey aek link de raha hoon,waqt nikaal ke us ko bhi dekh lijiye ga,yaqeenan aap ko bahot kuchh seekhaney ko miley ga, link yeh hai......http://www.hallagulla.com/urdu/urdu-...ls-137519.html bahot khush rahiye,
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#7
07-10-2007, 10:48 PM
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 Rulex Ji Poet Club Mai'n Aap Ki Aamad Ki Mujhay Bouhat Khushi Hui...Kaawish Bhi Mujhay Pasand Aai...Likhna Owr Share Karna Jari Rakhiye Insha Allah Jald Aap Ki Poetry Mai'n Nikhaar Aata Chala Jaey Ga... Sada Khush Rahiye...  ...+ )
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#8
07-11-2007, 09:34 AM
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Main rona chahti hon.. wahhh.. Poet's Club mein  app ki pehli kawish nazr se guzri.. pasand aayee.. nazm mein ehsaasat ki shiddat ko bil'tarteeb acha pesh kia gaya.. khayalt ko yakja rakhnay ki bohat had tak achi koshish dekhnay ko mili.. rawani mein bhi koi bohat bari khami dekhnay ko nahi mili.. wazn aur shayeri ke deegar asrar-o-romooz ke liye poetry tutorials mulahiza kijiye.. bunayadi tor per eik achi nazm takhleeq ki gayee.. so iss kamyaabi per dhairo'n daad-o-tehseen hamari janib se bhi qab |
Mai Rona Chahti Hun.... 
