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This is a discussion on MahabbatooN ka Tiri Ihtiraaf meN ne kia within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; Asslam o Alaikum aap ahbaab ki khidmat meN aik Ghazal paish kar raha hooN, apni raay se nawaaziyay ga. Wassalam ...
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#1
11-28-2006, 06:06 PM
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Asslam o Alaikum aap ahbaab ki khidmat meN aik Ghazal paish kar raha hooN, apni raay se nawaaziyay ga. Wassalam MuKhliC Ameen Asim 
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#2
11-28-2006, 06:46 PM
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 Poet Club Mai'n Masha Allah Aik Owr Bouhat Umda Poet Ka Izafa Huwa Hay... Aap Ki Ghazal Bouhat Pasand Aai..Bouhat Khoobsurat Ghazal Share Ki Hay Aap Nay..Albatta Composing Mai'n Kuch Imlay Ki Ghalti Hay...Bouhat Daad Qubool Kijiye..
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11-28-2006, 07:19 PM
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Asslamo alikum ameen sahab sab se pehle to pc poet club main khush amdeed ahan aap ki pehli ghazal se hi andaaza hogaya hai k MASHALLAh aap k ander umdah likhne ki khoobi hai jnab main bhi haya waali baat kehna chahoon gi k composing main imlay ki ghlati hain magar main ne apni aqal k hisaab se ghalti ko theek kar k parh liya hai daad kabool farmaaye
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#4
11-29-2006, 04:08 AM
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buhat achi ghazal kahai asaim aap nay magar baqol rida imla key ghaltian door key jiye ....anyway oncegain accept my cong. on ur loverly ghazal ....
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11-29-2006, 06:19 AM
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sab se pehly to aap ko HG poet's Club maiN khush-aamdeed...!!! pehli ghazal maiN hi aap ne dil jeet lia... itni achi ghazal... bohat khoob jnaab.. aur is sher k to kiya hi kehny... be-intha lutf de raha hy ye sher ab tak... "her aik zavi'ay se us ko jaanchna tah mujhy, isi li'ay to kisi ka tawaf maiN ne kiya..." meri janib se bhi dilli daad qabool kreN... Allah Mola aap ko is se bhi ziada ata kary... Aamin!!!
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#6
11-29-2006, 01:27 PM
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wah bohat zabardast janab......... 1.gif ")1")
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11-29-2006, 04:56 PM
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apki pahli kavish hi buhat achi lagi uhi likhtay rahay .. wish u all the best
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11-30-2006, 04:45 AM
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bohat bohat khoob ameen bhai really bohat khoob bohat bohat ziada daad qabool kerin meri terf say ore isi terha share kertayrehiye bohat bohat ziada duaan kaysath jahan rahinbohat ziada khush rahin imran
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#9
12-01-2006, 08:42 PM
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wahhhhhhh...wahhh wahh ....kiya hi dilkash ghazal kahi hai...aatay hi itni shandar ghazal...bayhadddddd d lutf aaya parh kar... aray haN...ghazal ke husn maiN kho kar hum apko welkom kehna bhool gaye...khush aamadeed khush rahiye...
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