Urdu Poetry Forum

Salam poets and friends,

as you have read the heading of this thread...I need help or some inspiration of a song I am recording.

It's basically an English Song from Michale Buble "Home" i am doing this in urdu for a very special friend of mine....

Up to now I have completed the 1st antra and I am stuck at the second.

As said its about a special friend and I would like to describe everything beautiful a friend can resemble or can be.... so please help me out if any of you have some ideas or poems or own written shairi...I would highly appreciate....those whose lyrics or shairs I will implement I will surely send him or her the song.....

So here are the lyrics I have so far:

Woh mera hai dost

Baharoon jaisa hai...sitaroon jaise hai...woh mera hai dost...woh mera hai dost

Khushbou jaise hai...pholoon jaise hai...woh mera hai dost...woh mera hai dost

Kaise yeh kahoon use ke mera dil hai woh..meri dharkan hai woh....meri hi jaan hai woh
Kaise yeh kahoon use ke meri khushi hai woh...meri dhoob hai woh...meri hi chaoon hai woh

Baharoon jaisa hai...sitaroon jaise hai...woh mera hai dost...woh mera hai dost
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Wa'Alaikum Salam ....


I'm moving your thread to "POET's CLUB" where we have dozens of members who are among the best poets on the face of internet ... i hope you will get some help there ...

Wassalam ...

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