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This is a discussion on Loat Kar Phir Na Kabhi Hamdam Aaye...... within the Urdu Poet Club forums, part of the Urdu Poetry category; LOAT KAR PHIR NA KABHI HAMDAM AAYE MOAT AAYI AUR NA HI SANAM AAYE ROTH GAI KHUSHIYAN US KAY JATAY ...
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08-03-2007, 11:49 AM
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LOAT KAR PHIR NA KABHI HAMDAM AAYE MOAT AAYI AUR NA HI SANAM AAYE ROTH GAI KHUSHIYAN US KAY JATAY HI MRAY PIYAR KAY HISAY MEIN GHAM AAYE BOHAT UDAAS BOHAT AAJ TANHA HEIN BARAY LAMBAY JUDAI KAY MOASAM AAYE HATH CHURA KAR CHAL DIYE WO TU YE NA POACHO KAISAY GHAR HUM AAY POACHTAY HEIN LOAG US KAY BARAY MEIN KYA BATAON MUJHAY TU SHARAM AAYE CHOAR DUNYA AAQBAT SANWAR aTHER KYA KHABAR KAB MOAT KA HUKAM AAYE         |
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08-03-2007, 02:10 PM
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ROTH GAI KHUSHIYAN US KAY JATAY HI MRAY PIYAR KAY HISAY MEIN GHAM AAYE Bohat Khoob..... Bohat Umda
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08-03-2007, 08:30 PM
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 janab...achi ghazal kahi aapne...ap maiN likhnay ki salahyataN haiN...mashq jari rakhiye...inshAllah mazeed nikhaar aata jayega... apke PM ka jawab bhi yaheeN diye daiti hooN.. taakay deegar members bhi istafada hasil kar sakaiN.. 1.gif ")1") daikhiye...wazan ka masla to musalsal mashq say hi hal ho sakta hai... likhna jari rakhiye...ustad sho'ra ka kalaam parhiye... pehlay aasan zameenaiN muntakhib kijiye ghazal kehnay k liye... choti behr maiN kahiye...phir darja ba darja agay barhtay jaaiye...aik martaba jab kuch rawani aa jaye to taqti seekhiye...k wazan kaisay nikaala jata hai... is tarah aik waqt aayega jab aap khud is qabil ho jayeN gay k daikhtay hi bata sakaiN k aaya koi misra/shair wazan maiN hai ya nahiN... mazeed madad k liye yahaN maine jo tutorials ki thread lagai hai...usay parhiye... baqi... Mods humaisha apki madad k liye mojood haiN... khush rahiye
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08-08-2007, 10:12 AM
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beautiful
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